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Alexxx the Medic!

PostPosted: Thu Nov 09, 2006 11:09 pm


a perfect view of picturesque seas
covering up madness
lying through teeth
we've beaten promises senseless
with each step, with each lost breath, we lose control
hiding the images of our futures from our present
even though our fates are aligned
even though oblivion isnt timed
heart shaped masks break into pieces
resting the shattered bones on ritual beaches
the only question as the minister preaches
through shallow forests and calm breezes
a soul clambers for air it cannot seek
to shriek a word it dares not speak
another secret to leak
to shape a mind
forever entombed
forever enshrined
that no heart should bear the compass of time
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Please tell me what you guys think, if you could be so kind. Thank you!  
PostPosted: Mon Feb 12, 2007 3:40 am


I think it's really good. It reminds me of Rage Against The Machine's music a lot.

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