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plop, plop, fizz, fizz
  oh what a relief it is
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Peach Lilac
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 10, 2006 6:55 am


I remember it like it was yesterday.
I was running around in my barefeet.
I was jumping out of trees after climbing to the very top.
I was swinging as high as I could so as not to be shown up by my sister.
I was telling mom about the day I had.
I was playing hide and seek with the neigborhood kids.
I was rideing my bike for the very first time.
I was cuddling in bed with Brownie, my favorite teddy.
I was smileing because I was happy.
Oh what I wouldn't give to be back in my memories, running around barefoot.


Again not perfect and I jotted it down pretty huridly. So don't be afraid to tell me it sucks. wink  
PostPosted: Fri Nov 10, 2006 11:30 am


I love poetry that doesn't rhyme... Not as much thought needs to go into it, and so it comes more from the heart than from the head.

Love this one, too!

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cherrish_girl
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PostPosted: Sat Nov 11, 2006 3:01 am


so far i like the memory u bring it on from that poetry!
u did great job!!
PostPosted: Sat Nov 11, 2006 5:19 am


For being written pretty fast that was damn good
I love it whee heart

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AngelMuerto

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PostPosted: Wed Nov 15, 2006 8:16 am


awesome poem. it's always nice to think back on the days when you were a kid. playing outside and stuff like that.
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