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What's In Your Jar?
  Troubles
  Smiles
  Laughter
  Pressure
  It's overflowing
  It's empty
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lll-Bucket-lll

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PostPosted: Fri Nov 10, 2006 11:49 am


Life in a jar
filling up with years
and experience
draining again with
the cold hand of death
and remaining empty
forever more
Or filling with trouble
and pain from living
overflowing with pressure
that follows events
The jar could fill slowly
one drop at a time
for every tear
that's fallen from
your eyes
during the times that
hurt most
The jar could fill quickly
with all of
the laughter
and smiles you've given
in response to
every joke and story
you've heard or told
Or it sits half filled
waiting for more
to happen
to fill it
and slowly it will
evaporate into
nothing again
PostPosted: Fri Nov 10, 2006 5:58 pm


I really like this one. I love that it pretty much raps life up in a jar.

Peach Lilac
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PostPosted: Sat Nov 11, 2006 5:26 am


that was totally awesome!
xd
PostPosted: Tue Nov 14, 2006 12:52 am


yes its so nice poet ^^ and i like the way u put block in some words, make
me feeling i read it on mind and every block colour u make keeps me to tell it more strong!! really nice job!

cherrish_girl
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popilacross

PostPosted: Wed Nov 15, 2006 5:24 am


for my jar, i think, i will choose 'empty'
PostPosted: Tue Dec 05, 2006 11:01 am


Very deep, enjoyable ^^.

DeaTh_WiLL_CoNQuER

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