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 Posted: Sat Nov 11, 2006 3:13 am
DIETIC WAY
I see that lobster dinner in the red licious tempting way
Ohhh too bad im on diet
Again they come with the bigest chicken turkey bay
Aww too bad im on diet
And suddenly the light on fully garnishing cake become x-ray
Grunchhh... toooo baaaddd immmm onnn diieeet
Why.. why.. why..
in this way....
Why.. why.. why..
i'm on dietic way!
lol its just come on my mind this time..
i will try do the better next time redface
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Posted: Sat Nov 11, 2006 3:21 am
Your poem really brightened my day when it was going to end in a sad way.
I like it very much.
3nodding
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Posted: Sat Nov 11, 2006 5:12 am
Now I want lobster! lol
that was awesome cherrish
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Posted: Sat Nov 11, 2006 9:11 am
I like it. It made me giggle lol
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Posted: Sat Nov 11, 2006 8:38 pm
Haha, aren't diets just cruel??
I like it! Good job! 3nodding
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Posted: Tue Nov 14, 2006 12:44 am
lol... ^^ is just on my mind that time.. not considering im on diet this time, but somehow i think about someone sit in comp play gaia, eating cookies, choclate or etc and stop it rite away while reading it huehue..
glad u like it!
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Posted: Wed Nov 15, 2006 8:43 am
neat poem cherrish. it made me feel like i was on a diet not being able to eat anything, hehee.
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Posted: Wed Nov 29, 2006 6:40 am
BLUR
Here the day comes
I'm so fascinating to see that
The sun rise up so fast
Then melt down with all the blury things I ever had
You there, stand still in front of the coffee shop
With such a great uniform
Covering with brazilian coffee aroma
Well Well what a such fling feeling
This my romantic first 'rende-vous'
With such a great france 'Monsieur'
'Good day' I say even I know it's not mine
cos my day already gone by the blur
blur in my eyes, blur in my nose,
i feel you so far....
blur here and there, blur goes and back,
i feel you so blur...
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Posted: Thu Nov 30, 2006 3:35 am
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Posted: Sun Dec 03, 2006 7:53 am
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