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 Posted: Sat Nov 11, 2006 6:46 pm
((ok...im going to be called sachiru in this story.... 3nodding and the anime is going to be yu yu hakusho-
urameshi yusuke-green
shuichi/yoko kurama-red
kazuma kuwabara-orange
jaganshi hiei-black
and im in cornflowerblue))~morning~ sachiru: wow! it's such a nice day today!kurama: yes...it isyusuke: let's go to the acades then!kuwabara: yeah! and then i'll beat you urameshi!yusuke: yeah right! i can beat you anyday kuwabara!hiei: hn....bakas sachiru: i guess we should go then...kurama: *nods*~so everyone goes to the arcades...hiei up in a tree, relaxing* yusuke: ha! i beat you!kuwabara: oh yeah? rematch then!sachiru: sigh* boys....kurama: *smiles*sachiru: okay! let's go and get ice cream now ^^yusuke: okey! *runs* i can run faster then you kuwabarakuwabara: no you dont! *runs after yusuke*sachiru: *Sigh*~all goes to the icecream shop~
the end
((i had fun^^ lol...weird...i know..i might write another one... sweatdrop and im sory for not adding much of hiei...))
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Posted: Sat Nov 11, 2006 6:52 pm
so uh....how was it? sweatdrop
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Posted: Sun Nov 12, 2006 4:42 am
its good it sounds like the beginning of a longer story^^ maybe it would make it more intersting if u made it looooongeeeeer!!! domokun 3nodding
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Posted: Sun Nov 12, 2006 1:57 pm
Grimgor its good it sounds like the beginning of a longer story^^ maybe it would make it more intersting if u made it looooongeeeeer!!! domokun 3nodding Sticks and stones may break my bones
(o.O)me agree w/ him ^_^ But whips and chains excite me xD (Dont get me wrong you perverts on gaia)
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Posted: Mon Nov 13, 2006 7:57 am
[~.Amaya.~] Grimgor its good it sounds like the beginning of a longer story^^ maybe it would make it more intersting if u made it looooongeeeeer!!! domokun 3nodding Sticks and stones may break my bones
(o.O)me agree w/ him ^_^ But whips and chains excite me xD (Dont get me wrong you perverts on gaia) the story expert agrees with me!!! blaugh i feel so smart!!
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Posted: Mon Nov 13, 2006 5:02 pm
fine fine....i shall make my next story lonnnngggggeeerrrrr then^_^
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Posted: Tue Nov 14, 2006 7:12 am
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Posted: Fri Nov 17, 2006 5:31 pm
kay then...i'll make another story if im bored or something><
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Posted: Wed Nov 22, 2006 6:46 pm
Grimgor [~.Amaya.~] Grimgor its good it sounds like the beginning of a longer story^^ maybe it would make it more intersting if u made it looooongeeeeer!!! domokun 3nodding Sticks and stones may break my bones
(o.O)me agree w/ him ^_^ But whips and chains excite me xD (Dont get me wrong you perverts on gaia) the story expert agrees with me!!! blaugh i feel so smart!! i am no expert...aki is 3nodding
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Posted: Mon Dec 04, 2006 9:46 am
[~.Amaya.~] Grimgor [~.Amaya.~] Grimgor its good it sounds like the beginning of a longer story^^ maybe it would make it more intersting if u made it looooongeeeeer!!! domokun 3nodding Sticks and stones may break my bones
(o.O)me agree w/ him ^_^ But whips and chains excite me xD (Dont get me wrong you perverts on gaia) the story expert agrees with me!!! blaugh i feel so smart!! i am no expert...aki is 3nodding no u da man!!!!
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Posted: Wed Dec 06, 2006 2:17 pm
Tomo: Great! I've never seen such a perfect yawn! It's like she came from the Kingdom of Yawning to spread her yawn to us!no me not! =P You're the Lord of the Yawn!....Azumanga Daioh
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Posted: Fri Mar 02, 2007 10:16 am
not bad story^^ countinue it!!!! blaugh pirate
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Posted: Fri Mar 02, 2007 2:10 pm
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