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 Posted: Mon Nov 13, 2006 10:05 pm
Hi, I decided to post some of my poetry here, in hopes to encourage some of you to the same. ninja I would really love to see some other people work! So come on... lol Anywho, Please sit back enjoy, and when your done, Please give me some comments and suggestions. Thankyou for your time. xd
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Posted: Mon Nov 13, 2006 10:09 pm
Not Enough
Death rides on a breath of warm air
One word can mean so many things
Yet mean so little to someone
New beginings are left and lost in memories
Try hard to remember but they never stay perfect
Why does it matter though?
What do thoughts and words matter anyway?
Flowers bloom and then they wilt
Life flows in the same pattern
Is it worthless to live or is it pointless to die?
Do we really only have one chance at life,
Nothing after.
Why can that be such a disturbing concept to handle
Or how can it be so easily excepted?
To give up and not have hope,
But then again what is hope?
False thoughts of something that may never happen.
The unknown?
This confusion persists as I try to unravel to much
Shall I leave it be or sit there , confounded?
To much, too much...
Not enough, not enough...
I don't know if I should leave on these thoughts...
But it's all I can do
Besides torture myself with thinking to much....
To much, too much
Not enough.
Understandment
I read your words,
And start to understand how you feel...
Left in the dark is your world
Crying out,
Cause you can't escape your fears...
No one can hear you,
And you get scared...
But don't worry cause some one does care.....
You don't know me
But I know you
And so as I write this
I hope I reach out to you
Not to leave you in the dark
But to save you from your misery......
Take my hand
And don't let go,
Let me guide so that your not alone...
Take my hand
Let me guide you,
To a new world......
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Posted: Mon Nov 13, 2006 10:11 pm
Nightmare
Darkness waits the dim night
Silence moving across the sky
Dripping down to cover the ground
Shadows follow his footsteps
As he stalks his prey like a black panther
On a midnights gray
Silently waiting in patience
Darkness takes the girl by her throat
Glaring into her soul
Pulls her closer into the shadows next to him
Sinking fangs, the breaking of skin
watching her blood drip till it turns black within
The morning sun takes her away,
The creature lets out a scream of agony
As the dawn approaches
Feeling skin burn he runs away
Leaving the girl lay helplessly
As she vanishes away
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Posted: Mon Nov 13, 2006 10:22 pm
Eternal Darkness Within
Fallen beneath the surface
Darkness rising out of the depths
Secrets wash over me as I close my eyes
Singing sweet sorrow in my ear
As I gently fall away
My dreams become filled with agony
As I go on to soon be devoured from my inner
I wait as the dawn approaches
No one knows I'm there
But the little serpent
Slithering out of my bed
Left alone and no where to go
The shadows fall upon me
As I struggle to regain my strength
I fall slowly before thy
The darkness takes me away
My tears fall upon my skin
Screaming from within
Nothing touches me but my sin
The eternal darkness that is rising
slowly devours me from within
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Posted: Mon Nov 13, 2006 10:25 pm
Ode To Fire
The colors reflect of fire
On to my face it gleams.
I feel the fury,
Of this flame
So great,
For such a small thing.
For every time
I light a fire, my rage burns brighter.
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Posted: Mon Nov 13, 2006 10:26 pm
Darknesse's Sprial
Follow the leader
Down the darking sprial
To your death
There you will find your freedom
Holding arms wide open
Looks so inviteing yet you hide
Glideing the blade down that little line
Yes you know you could
But do you really want to?
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Posted: Mon Nov 13, 2006 10:34 pm
Memories of Shadows
These thoughts and memories keep haunting me
They just won't go away
And as it clowly drags me down,
I lose my way
Lost in the emptiness in my mind
It seems that I am so very hard to find
So as I go I start to cry
Running away from all of my fears inside
Cause I'm lost and alone
"Chrous"
My tears stream down my face
As I fall to my knees in my darkest grace
Shadows reach out to me
And I just can't escape from it anymore
My thoughs keep leading me
To the darkness in my heart
I try to hide, escapeing the pain inside
Bleeding from within
Cuts just keep appearing
As this blade runs across my skin
I start to cry
I start to scream
Cause I'm lost and alone
"Chorus"
My tears stream down my face
As I fall to my knees in my darkest grace
Shadows reach out to me
And I just can't escape from it anymore
It seem that I cry out
In vain, only to explain
Why these tears are falling
I cry, I cry, I forever cry....
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Posted: Mon Nov 13, 2006 10:46 pm
Betrayed Tears
(your cries are barely heard...so why do you try?
can't you see they have all betrayed you?
why do you still trust?
what are you looking for?
what can you find in this pathetic humanity)
your scared, lost, and alone
you go wondering around
your tryin to keep your eyes on the ground
in fear that someone might know you
and give your secret away
Your running away
yes they already know
your parionoia has already gotten to you
searching for an anwser to this life
looking for a reason to live
or a chance to die
(your cries are barely heard...so why do you try?
can't you see they have all betrayed you?
why do you still trust?
what are you looking for?
what can you find in this pathetic humanity)
Crying on the back porch of an old hotel
rain pouring down on you
drenched, cold, sick and alone,
hidden in the shadow as they devor you
walking home but in reality
you've got no place to go
so you lie to yourself and everyone eles
but you never knew why
your running from your problems
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Posted: Mon Nov 13, 2006 10:48 pm
Misery of Revenge
Why must those haunt you
Left out to wilt
Your seeds of revenge
Reckoning all of those
That stood in your way
Now their gone
So you can move on
Yet it seems your still haunted by there
Memories.
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Posted: Mon Nov 13, 2006 10:49 pm
Imaginary friend
Some days we all need some comfort
Some days we all need our space
Some days I just need your touch
and I'll know everything will be alright
Some days we all need our friends
Some days we all need to be alone
Some days I just need you near
and I'll know everything so much more clearer
You will never know these things,
so don't wory
about me...
Because I don't exist
My imagination
is your creation and all
I need is your thoughts to exist
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Posted: Mon Nov 13, 2006 10:50 pm
Ok there is a few for you to enjoy hopefully, please give me some feed back...
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Posted: Wed Nov 15, 2006 6:23 pm
thats really good. do you do modernist poetry??
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Posted: Wed Nov 15, 2006 7:21 pm
sirrashigal thats really good. do you do modernist poetry?? thanks, a few of those are a few years old though.. *turns red slightly* I don't think I know what modernist poetry is. um could you please tell me?
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Posted: Fri Nov 24, 2006 4:30 pm
i reallly like it, you are good with words 4laugh
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Posted: Fri Nov 24, 2006 4:31 pm
Tashikana i reallly like it, you are good with words 4laugh lol thankyou...oh did I tell you I won an Essay contest at school I entered? Took first...lol
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