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Once upon a time, back when wars were waged, there was three friends, freedert, elliot, and David. Freedert, a beautiful young girl, loved the handsome Elliot over David, thus making a love triangle form. Elliot had been assigned to the war going on outside the town, and had to leave for a year. Before Elliot left, Freedert gave him a sword for good luck, this sword was called "the wedge of time", Elliot looked deep into Freedert's eyes and said,"I love you, I will come back." Elliot walked off as Freedert cried softly, David came to her side and held her in his arms. David had been in charge of Freedert until Elliot came back. There was a suspisous twinkle in David's eye that concerned Freedert, but she just let it go. Later that night, David prayed to a stature in the church hall for Elliot to die. This stature was called the "second hand of time". At that moment, Elliot was shot in the back with an arrow that looked like a clocks hand, as if it was sent by the Second Hand of Time, Elliot sat on the cold ground, with blood all around him, he was obviously dead. i love this story When David told Freedert the news, instead of running into David's arms, she ran for the Second Hand of Time, she prayed for her life to be taken in a replacement for her's. When David found Freedert, she was cold and dead on the floor, he didn't know what happened. When Elliot awoke, his blood was turned into the red petals of the flowers Freedert loved, he traved back to his home town, where he saw a grave, the grave was encripted with "FREEDERT". Elliot tried to ask David what had happened, but he didn't know. ooooh i wanna do the last part but go on Elliot then went to the church and prayed to the Second Hand of Time, he want to give his life for hers. Instead of what he prayed for, the Second Hand of Time sent the both of them to heaven to live happily ever after. Or did they? The actual event was that Freedert was to share a soul within the Second Hand of Time, and Elliot was in the Wedge of Time. more more more!!!!!!!! Now, years later, a boy named Daisuke Niwa opened a path for them, he painted a picture that reflected the world of the Second Hand of Time. Under a spell, he fell in love with Freedert, he was being controlled by the Second Hand of Time. Daisuke was thrown into his own painting to be a replacement for Elliot. Freedert was still waiting for Elliot, and so Daisuke promised to stay by her side until they found him. more but leave me the last part Daisuke was talking to Freedert about how his class was doing a play on "Ice and Snow" The particular story about Freedert and Elliot. Surprised about Daisuke telling a lighter story surprized her, and she told him the whole story. Time was running out for Daisuke in the painting before he could be trapped there forever. Freedert's time was also running out, and Elliot was nowhere to be found. Within the snowy abyss appered a windmill like the one by Daisuke's house, so they made thier way there and down the steps inside.
WTF is the last part?!
Freedert was saying her goodbyes to Daisuke, but he was convinced that she sould wait a little longer for Elliot to come. As he went to touch her, she was as cold as ice, and the Second Hand of Time appeared. "It seems I have made yet another mistake" she said woefully. Just then, from the heavens came Dark, an angel that shared Daisuke's body, but got seperated when Daisuke went through the painting. Dark was pulling Daisuke away from Freedert, even though he fought from it. Enventually removing Daisuke, they flew up to the heavens to free themselves from the painting, as they were flying the Wedge of Time was falling towards Freedert. The sword transformed into Elliot, and Daisuke's voice echoed "Freedert!" As he left the painting.
Your turn! Make me proud!
lmao" Elliots body was moving swiftly downward making its way to Fredert, She raised her arms with joy as she noticed Elliot coming towards her. As soon as they touched, a bright light shone and Freedert's heart was pierced by the Wedge of Time. The Second Hand of Time exploded in a pretty snow of shards, Elliot and Freedert, now together again, held each other in thier arms. Floating in Heaven Freedert looked at Elliot,"Do you rember the promise?" She asked. Elliot smiled sweetly,"We'll be together...Forever" His voice echoed as they dissapeared.
I revised it for you...It wasn't In her head....If u were paying attention....I sooo glad Im done..!
i kno i wasnt i coulnt remember

=O=O Nice summary and everything but-- >3<, but what happened to KYLE?

hmm.... not to seem rude, but wasn't this story, the true story, called Ice and Dark and was written by Kyle?

What's up with the "Kyle" "David " name replacement?

I love that story it is soo sweet yet soo sad!

that story was cool but the way they portraited it in the manga was better then the way in the anime i think

U described it just like the show. U are so good at telling the story.