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 Posted: Fri Nov 17, 2006 4:29 pm
I claim this spot as mine!!~ xd
Yeah.. i'll be putting all ((YES ALL!!)) my happy poems.. here in this thread!!~ heart
I want a lot of feed-back, so please tell me what you think!!~ ninja
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Posted: Fri Nov 17, 2006 4:30 pm
*~The Open Door~*
There are so many things I never wanted you to know
There are so many feelings I tried so desperately to never show
I never wanted you to see this side of me
All this pain.. The waves of dismay make it so I can barley breathe
I put on my mask as another day begins
I may act like I’m friendly.. and such a great friend
I'll laugh, I’ll smile, and I’ll say everything is fine
But if you really know me.. You’ll see right through that lie
After school I get home and lock the door
Choking on tears as I fall to the floor
Wanting so desperately back those old nasty habits
But knowing well I can't go back to it
I don’t want to fall again... I don’t want to die
Though one more broken heat... may just take my life
I've been lied to before... it hurt so bad
All this hate inside is soon to drive me mad
But what is this I see?
You say you want me to believe
Even after you've seen the monster I’ve become
You still tell me that I’m the one
Please don’t leave me now that you see the truth
I'm only this was from all I’ve been through
Help me spread my wings and fly again
Be there with me till the end
Everyday I heal more and more
Please... please lock the last open door...
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Posted: Fri Nov 17, 2006 4:33 pm
*~Shadows~*
I am nothing more,
Than a shadow of my past.
Hiding behind this smile,
As my mask.
A mask worn down,
With too many scars.
While I’m chained and shackled,
To these bars.
A mask unbreakable,
From all my life’s pain.
Impenetrable,
From all my vain.
Though without it,
I can't hold on.
Because the truth is,
I've been wearing it all along.
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Posted: Fri Nov 17, 2006 4:34 pm
*~Deception~*
Lost in a dying world,
She lived off of misery.
Blinded by her rage,
The truth she could no longer see.
Drowning in her sorrow,
She still tried to live.
Haunted by her screams,
She killed her soul, that’s what they said.
Lied to,
She could no longer carry on.
Misunderstood,
She still singes his song.
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Posted: Fri Nov 17, 2006 4:37 pm
*~In my mind~*
Forgotten promises,
A thousand lies.
That prowl restlessly,
In my mind.
Screaming thoughts,
Dying dreams.
Nothing is,
What it seems.
I’m unheard,
And crying out.
No one cares,
I’m full of doubt.
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Posted: Fri Nov 17, 2006 4:39 pm
*~My little sea of sorrow~*
The sea rushes in
All hope and direction seems lost
Which way to go I know not
Despair and sadness tries to drown me
The tall waves of affection crash down
My fear reaches from below
Trying to pull me asunder
Rain falls hard
From the heavens above
Which I so long for
Within my sea of sorrow
I find a way to control it
Though rain still drenches me to the bone
But I love my little sea of sorrow
For you see
That this sea has become me
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Posted: Fri Nov 17, 2006 4:40 pm
*~Save Me~*
Are you sure you love me for everything I am?
There's still so many things about me you don't understand
If you saw the side of me I locked away
Are you so sure with me you'd want to stay?
If you saw all these tears and heard my screaming
Would you be drove away be this inner demon?
If you saw the doubt in my mind
Would you still be as kind?
If you even want to save my life
You better think twice
I don't want you to leave
I need.. I want you here with me
When I cry I want you to smile
Stay with me a little while
If I break down and start to scream
Hold me tight like in a dream
Tell me you love me like you mean it
That there's no one else you'd rather be with
Tell me you'll stay with me till the end of time
And you may just save my life
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Posted: Sat Nov 18, 2006 6:01 am
That's quite a good poem. I relate with that poem a lot. Nice work.
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Posted: Sat Nov 18, 2006 6:02 am
That is also a very good poem. You are quite a good poet you know, and many people will enjoy to read your poems if you ever published them.
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Posted: Sat Nov 18, 2006 6:04 am
She lived off of misery... sad... She killed her soul... Good good... By the way, I'm going to comment on every single one of your poems here...
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Posted: Sat Nov 18, 2006 6:04 am
I often feel like noone cares for me... Nice work, again.
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Posted: Sat Nov 18, 2006 6:06 am
yamasheta itoe *~My little sea of sorrow~* This is a very good poem, and many people would relate to it, deep inside. Everyone has had there moments of sadness...
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Posted: Sat Nov 18, 2006 6:08 am
That's... well, I can't explain how I feel about it in words... Its... brilliant.
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Posted: Sat Nov 18, 2006 9:59 am
Thank you so much!! Yeah.. i'm really considering becoming a writter ((i've been for the past couple years.))
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Posted: Sat Nov 18, 2006 11:17 am
Cool. I myself have been pondering over the thought of publishing all of my poems after writing about 111.
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