I need some advice I going to make a book it going to be a FMA fan fiction and I was wondering about the my charater

Name:Kiki
age:26
Bio:Her mother was murder at the age 15.She Joined the millatry at age 25 to she if she would find anything about the murder of her mother but never knew she would end up falling in love with a man in the milltary and end up being the prime suspect of a murder in the millatry and comeing back to her home town with her lover with the millatry on there tail.
((I drew Kiki myself))

Name:Kiki
age:26
Bio:Her mother was murder at the age 15.She Joined the millatry at age 25 to she if she would find anything about the murder of her mother but never knew she would end up falling in love with a man in the milltary and end up being the prime suspect of a murder in the millatry and comeing back to her home town with her lover with the millatry on there tail.
((I drew Kiki myself))
