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Makiko_Midori
Captain

PostPosted: Mon Jun 13, 2005 7:30 pm


This thread is for discussing your character [Duh!]. Here you can discuss reasons why your character acts the way s/he does and anything related to your character.

[[Thanks to Orta-chan for the idea]]
PostPosted: Tue Sep 27, 2005 9:42 pm


Kiyoshi has a number of psychological and family issues that were never dismissed or worked out through a physician, and now constantly nag and eat away at him. One of his main problems that can be inferred is his inability to work well with others and his lack of social skills. This derives from his years of constant traveling and searching alone. He has learned not to trust anyone but himself, his ANBU squad, and the Kage. Lonliness only bolsters this huge factor in causing Kiyoshi to talk to others.

Another thing is his family issues. Kiyoshi fears he will never live up to the family name or make them proud, regardless of how many siblings of his will carry on the bloodline and Hyuuga name. Though he wants to carry it further, he hatred for his father stops this from advancing. This stems from (and also contributes to/explains) his father having a slight preference over who gets to be chosen for what and when. Although Kiyoshi was the best at everything he did, and graduated 3 years ahead of his brothers and sisters, the Hyuuga family only took the siblings and left Kiyoshi in Kumogakure. They considered him too overconfident in his skills and a danger to their existence...calling him "the main house's Hyuuga Neji" A bitterness rose, as well as a slight superiority complex over time.

I hope this clears up some mystery behind why Kiyoshi is so angry or dark all the time. I think he just needs a companion (or a frickin' hug! sweatdrop )

Kiyoshi_Toshihiro


Dark Pentacle

PostPosted: Tue Nov 15, 2005 1:48 am


if you read my profile you'll see something that is out of place so that is why him here to tell you what it is free form Berserker. will a free form Berserker is a fighter who only likes to fight head one just charge the battle feild and just let his skills do all the work in other words if you see me in a battle then you are in the middle of all the fighting that is where my character is happest and a free form Berserker is one of the most fear type of warriors do to the fact they hide all there pain and fears till they finish killing everyone or gets killed so you can shot up my character full of arrows and he will keep coming till his body just gives in and my bio state i have no family so this is how i come to town and no live there
PostPosted: Tue Nov 15, 2005 9:05 am


Vee ill tell you right now learn some posting grammar. If you need help read some of the posts by Kyoshi or Onimaru they are good multi paragraph posters. I personally have learned that illiteracy is not worthwhile in RP guilds, so please work on it. That is all I ask from reading your post and your character description.

Fatealerion
Crew


Dark Pentacle

PostPosted: Tue Nov 15, 2005 4:05 pm


will hell if you don't like the way i post then i'm gone bye
PostPosted: Tue Nov 15, 2005 6:51 pm


I am only looking at you and seeing my past clear as day. The statement was not to offend you but to make you a better RPer as a whole so we can reply to your posts and understand what you are saying in your posts. I myself am a horrible speller and I have taken to spellchecking each post before I post them in the forums now. All I'm asking is that you use some grammar not a puddle of words.

Fatealerion
Crew


Kiyoshi_Toshihiro

PostPosted: Tue Nov 15, 2005 7:44 pm


dark omen lord
if you read my profile you'll see something that is out of place so that is why him here to tell you what it is free form Berserker. will a free form Berserker is a fighter who only likes to fight head one just charge the battle feild and just let his skills do all the work in other words if you see me in a battle then you are in the middle of all the fighting that is where my character is happest and a free form Berserker is one of the most fear type of warriors do to the fact they hide all there pain and fears till they finish killing everyone or gets killed so you can shot up my character full of arrows and he will keep coming till his body just gives in and my bio state i have no family so this is how i come to town and no live there

Um. Yeah, you definitely have some kind of run-on sentence orgy going there. But looking at what you said, and not to be mean or anything, but we cannot allow a character such as the one you described in our midst. Even berserkers feel pain. It is the natural law of physics and combat. Saying that you feel a slight tickle as the arrow passes by you would be enough. But what you have, sir, is a tanker. That is considered godmodding and is frowned upon in many a guild. So if you could please either edit this post or delete it completely, this problem between Fate, you, and me can be solved without further hassle. Thank you.

(EDIT: Oh, one more thing. This is a ninja guild. As in "sneak, sneak, stab, stab" Get my drift? We can't really have walking brutes in our midst. I'm not saying you can't be a ninja, it would just be hard for you to really stand gracefully on a pole with all that muscle mass. Maybe someone along the lines of the Akimichi clan, ne?)
PostPosted: Tue Nov 15, 2005 8:02 pm


I completely agree with Kiyoshi-san. Literacy is important in this guild and in RPing. I myself may misspell a few words and I may not seperate my long posts into paragraphs but those are just minor. I acknowledge the fact that you don't use chat speak [As in using '2' for 'to/too'], but capitalization and punctuation is essential. Other RPers will be able to understand you and reply the correct way. Also, Berserkers aren't neede in a village like this. It's alright to be a strong fighter but this village has been through enough than to take on someone who will attack relentlessly, and eventually die because of stupidity. I'm not asking you to leave the guild or to stop RPing. I'm asking you nicely to edit/delete your post and change your profile. And please, please try your hardest to type correctly.

Oh and remember, Fate-san and Kiyoshi-san are moderators. They have a right to ban you if you cause any trouble and disrupt the peaceful nature of this guild and/or village. And try not to get into too many arguements. I truley dislike them in many ways and if you disobey mine and the guilds rules then I will ban you personally, which will be the first for me.

Thanks for reading and try to improve,
~Makiko Kaoru Kei Midori~

P.S. The reason this guild was created was to keep out the illiterate people. Just thought I should mention that as well.

[[By the way, I shall have Midori's and Nakimaru's past typed up soon. All the ideas are swimming in my head I just haven't put them to paper yet. xP;; ]]

Makiko_Midori
Captain


Miyukidou

PostPosted: Thu Dec 22, 2005 5:12 pm


Fate, my character is a fox. Not a cat.
PostPosted: Sat Dec 24, 2005 11:11 pm


((Yipee Skipee! Time for everyone's favorite teacher to make a post!))
"Those who cannot do, teach." This couldn't be anymore true for Oni. Oni ahbors violence, feeling that only mindless brutes can't solve their problems without fighting. He's one of the, if not the most difficult sensi in the whole clan, seeing how only one student survived his training (but he's dead now). Oni's calm and calculating and never gives into his temper. He is also a master of controling fire and believes it's a burden, rather than a gift. He sees his skills as walking on a razor's edge between order and choas. He understands that while fire may provide one with great power, it also has a mind of it's own and only lives to consume and destroy. As it's bearer, it's his job to keep the great flame under control. This is the main reason why he's so selective when it comes to his students (and why so many haven't survived the training). Oni also has a bad habit of being overly cynical and pointing out your every flaw. While this may be helpful in some aspects of training, Oni never bothers to tell his student how to change it. He feels that just another part of his training.

Unlike most of the other ninja in the clan, Oni is suprisingly merciful. Since most of the fights he get in are either over pride or against some enemy of the village, keeping them only makes sense. A blow to the ego burns much deeper than a deathblow.

Onimoru


Jinx1377

PostPosted: Sat Jan 21, 2006 12:19 pm


the reason my charachter*bad spelling* has a crystal of a white rose in his wrist is because he was once a oracle. He only uses his sythe and a advanced bloodline of his that has to do with his name.(the sythe has to do with the bloodline and so does the crystal) when my char gets into a fight he normally puts his hood up to hide his real ears he is actully part cat he has cat ears, a tail, Chakara claws and legs,*when not in control* and extreme reflexes. He thinks he has to keep this secret or he will be exiled. i will be trying to get a pic of him on here so people can know what he looks like. Every now and then Rose loses control of his body to the cat in him who is sly and cunning but when this happens if some one of the opposite sex huggs him he turns into a cat till he is normal again.*furuba effect* When the cat takes over Rose gains huge amounts of chakara. When rose needs he is able to call up any animal related to cats trough his mind to aid or comfort him. Rose is able to control wind as he sees fit but he uses it to heal and protect his allys more than to attack his foes. Rose is not one to fight and will avoid it at all possible but when he needs to he will and will go all out
PostPosted: Sat Jan 21, 2006 8:30 pm


Windja, it would be alot more helpful if you go to the sticky labeled "Character Profiles" and describe Rose in there. I'm not trying to be mean, just giving advice.

Miyukidou


burntmill

PostPosted: Thu Jan 26, 2006 2:05 pm


Daisuke has had a troubled past, in which most of it he can't really remember. He is haunted my emotional flashbacks and dreams, and feels hate, anger and depression, and he dosn't even know why. Just recently, all those feelings faded after a while locked away in his apartment, in which he lives alone. He has a complex mind.
PostPosted: Sun Feb 12, 2006 12:11 pm


I think I described my character pretty well in the profile, but I just want people to know, that he's not rebelious. He was just bored. Just putting that out there.

Psychic_Master

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