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Sacrena

PostPosted: Sat Nov 25, 2006 12:13 pm


Candle To Last

Burning candles blow out fast
Seems like none shall ever last
Wick too short or wax too weak
Dripping blood as my heart weeps
No warmth provided anymore
Wond'ring what "love" is really for
To cause you joy or deathly pain
Now I question what's to gain
This "true love" my heart desires
Or the burn of betrayal's fires
The tears that follow their good-bye's
Or their laughter 'cause I cry
Is this candle I search for
Really worth me slandered whore
Just 'cause of what I've been told
Of this candle I can hold
A flame to last and never waver
A smell to keep and need not savor
The warmth that's given is mine to keep
No more laughter to make me weep
No more fires to harm my heart
Just the love right from the start
Burning candles blow out too fast
Maybe the next is the one to last
PostPosted: Sat Jan 13, 2007 5:39 pm


It was okay.

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lesbian_kitten_of_doom

PostPosted: Wed Jan 17, 2007 11:03 am


peoplez are being mean!!! i liked it its better than a lot of the stuff i've heard!!!! i thinkz its kool!! 3nodding 3nodding 3nodding
PostPosted: Thu Jan 18, 2007 5:52 pm


not too shabby! blaugh

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abandon-morality

PostPosted: Fri Jun 15, 2007 3:49 pm


i liked it -_- ninja

meanie peopllez it was a good poem.
PostPosted: Wed Oct 24, 2007 7:42 pm


It has a good flow/ rythm to it, I like it. I though it was really goog...AKA GOOD. mrgreen

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Dapper Darling

PostPosted: Fri Nov 09, 2007 4:37 pm


Deep, very deep. I liked it a lot, especially the amount of emotion that seemed to be behind it. biggrin
PostPosted: Fri Apr 11, 2008 9:34 pm


i lieked it mrgreen

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