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sylent-shadow
Captain

PostPosted: Thu Nov 30, 2006 3:16 pm


Ode to Rose

Oh the brilliant red, white, pink, and yellow,
The perfect gift from any fellow,
You promise something beautiful and sweet,
Soft as a petal, Perfect as a leaf,
Stunningly beautiful,
It opens to the day,
To be adored, admired, inspired,
Gazed upon lovingly,
A toy not to be played,
Thought draws the hand,
Intention draws the heart,
Think to take but get a start,
Never forget the thorns that grow,
Hidden beneath,
Row upon row,
The brilliant red, white, pink, and yellow,
The perfect gift from any fellow?
PostPosted: Fri Dec 01, 2006 5:35 am




Ooh! Kumo likes it! Mind if I post my poem about roses? Well, sort of... XD


The Bossa


The Bossa

PostPosted: Fri Dec 01, 2006 5:38 am




Well, I decided to just post it for fun. It's a poem I wrote for my brother.


I once believed that every rose had its thorns.
As a budding rosebush,
you seemed too painful for the reward.
Who is to say what could bloom?
Roses red as shed blood,
white, pure as fallen tears,
as black as anger and bitterness?
Maybe you are a mystery, like the blue rose,
blue for the lesson you have taught me.
Now I say to you, as it should be said,
Every thorn has its rose, and if you endure your troubles,
The beautiful rose inside is sure to bloom.

PostPosted: Fri Dec 01, 2006 9:44 am


jajaj loved it seems funny and places an obious question to the writer of what would that gift be... I consider it is very good... I envy rhimes I can not do them

irrock


Awesomega30
Crew

PostPosted: Mon Dec 04, 2006 9:16 pm


I really like it. It does leave a little something to ponder about. And that's what makes it so good. Ah the rose, so much beauty yet the thorns still remain. ('Less the thorns are removed...)
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