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Sachi_x
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 01, 2006 6:36 pm


A random poem I wrote in about 5 minutes sweatdrop Enjoy, and critique welcome.

"We used to race among the corn
As we played under bright, high skies
Eager to meet each new morn
We awaited each new surprise
When tears would flow because a scrape
Was fresh on your dusty knees
And never because of trauma or war
We could laugh and dream as we pleased
Whatever happened to such a time,
The time we now call childhood?
Why ever did we have to grow up,
And find this sorrow with little good?
What happened to the mystery
Of walking in the cornrows high?
What about the shapes in the clouds
We used to see float through the sky?
I miss the sounds that were once known
The sights, the fun, and bright unknown
How I wish I could be small again
And lose this anxious weight"
PostPosted: Sun Dec 10, 2006 7:04 pm


Childhood was painful/the best years of my life (Eh go figure) Anyway ur poem is really good ^_^. It was a bit happier than most of your poems (no offense but ur like wayyyyy depressed ^ ^0....I'm just kiddin ok? jeez don't freak out) well...

cya

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Sachi_x
Captain

PostPosted: Mon Dec 11, 2006 4:43 am


Heheh, thanks? sweatdrop Just kidding. And I'm the emo kid, rmeember? wink
PostPosted: Wed Dec 13, 2006 7:54 pm


It was good, and stuff.
Well, I say that alot, but it really is.
I like the idea with the fields of corn. <3 I live around corn fields, I've never walked through them, but I live around them, and it reminds me of here.
I like that too, 'cause I'm moving and stuff.
Buuut... back to the poem part... XD
It was good. =D

Quatres-demon


Sachi_x
Captain

PostPosted: Thu Dec 14, 2006 6:01 pm


Thank you smile There's some corn around here, too, but not so much as Ohio, Indiana and stuff. I haven't been on farms too often ^^; The idea just sort-of came, and I went with it.

And moving stinks some of the time. My parents want to move closer to our school (soon to be schools when I go to high school), bu I won't go xd I really love it here ^^;
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