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Pretty Guardian Inuyasha Vice Captain
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 Posted: Sun Dec 03, 2006 9:33 pm
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Posted: Thu Dec 21, 2006 7:01 pm
OH MY GAWD! THAT WAS AWESOME! Much better than any of mine...
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Posted: Tue Jan 16, 2007 7:45 am
OH MY GAWD that was really good! I freaking cried when I read it!
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Posted: Sun Feb 11, 2007 11:02 am
Great story. The descriptions were amazing and Billie's explanation of his feelings in the narration were so down-to-earth without being overly obvious and cliche about it. I love the ending dialogue, the last line was perfect. Mike's characterization, in my opinion, does his sweet demeanor justice (Well, at least in the way I percieve him. I don't personally know him unfortunately.). Billie's character was relatable and really got the readers shedding tears for him, poor guy.
In short, it was fantastic story. Nice job. biggrin
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