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Romantic, or love, or positive, or happy poems

Divine

Sini X

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Posted: Sun Dec 03, 2006 10:39 pm

Made in heaven are the kisses you give to me/
and with you every day is different/
like milk and honey are your words/
when you tell me that I'm the one/
toast to your divinity/
toast to love

This was written to my boyfriend, and I think I'll send this to him in his christmas card...

Posted: Tue Dec 05, 2006 7:25 pm

I think it is beautiful! That is how i feel about my girlfriend...<3

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Miss_J_Lynn

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Posted: Sat Jun 30, 2007 5:59 pm

i gave u a four, the reason being cuz sumthins missing but i'm not sure what

Posted: Tue Jul 17, 2007 10:07 pm

I felt that the poem needed to be longer for it to project the full meaning. Basically you have a great start you just need to keep going.

IkaruTiger

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LittleMissFoxy

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Posted: Tue Jul 29, 2008 10:38 am

"... the part of us, from above..." would have made a great ending no
matter how much it exceeds the original end. xD

I love the poem's simplicity and if someone can understand the depth of
it's emotion, then it's as complete as it was meant to be for the one you
just can't wait to see.

Posted: Sun Jan 18, 2009 2:26 pm

it's really beautiful and romantic, but there's something missing. i think the emotion just isn't coming through as much as it wants to.

Basil-tofu

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