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"Meet The Sohma's" (rated T)

WillHatsuharu

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Posted: Thu Dec 14, 2006 6:26 pm

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This is my fanfiction "Meet the Sohma's" strongly influenced by Hatsuharu Sohma, my favourite character. Basically, Hatsuharu's 17th Birthday is coming up, as a result, he has invited Will, Jess and Brendan to go back to Kawaia to celebrate. But the NightshadeDarkWing family have some plans of their own as Jess has been expelled from Domino High. OC tragedy at 1 point.

OC's include Will Nightshade, Brendan Nightshade, Jess Dark Wing and Kris Bonez.

Disclaimer: If i did own FB i would incorporate tea gardner from yu-gi-oh (I refuse to capitolise her name) into every episode so she can die as a comic releif.

Final note: I love reviews so please Read and Review so i can keep posting up new chappies. LOVE YOU ALL.

~WillHatsuharu~

Posted: Sun Dec 17, 2006 1:46 pm

It's pretty good, but I would suggest not putting half the fanfic in script form. Other than that, great job! I loved the plot and the way you showed each characters personalities!