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PostPosted: Sat Dec 16, 2006 3:51 pm


Hokay, I was bored, so I played Sword of Mana and Legend of Mana for the thousandth time. Literaly... While playing, I remembered that Sword of Mana had a terrible ending! (Hero and Heroine finally say they love each other, then Heroine turns into a friggen tree! And the world still isn't completely saved! Gahh! I don't mind when they kill a character off, but when they turn one into a plant and kill another, kinda pisses me off. Poor Hero.)

So, I decided to make a semi happy ending after the orginal. This story will be a fan fiction sequal to Sword of Mana.

Now, I'm also going to do alot with Legend of Mana. Sence LOS was a side story of the Mana series, I decided to add it. One, I love the Jumis, two I love the fairies, three, SOM world isn't the same as SOL. Different world name, different places, different people!

SO yeah. I'll post the characters. (Should be around sevenish)

AND, for yaoi fans there may be a boyxboy pairing. But knowing me, I might kill one of them off.... Hee. I'll try not too.
PostPosted: Sun Dec 17, 2006 2:10 pm


Sword of Mana, Hero's name: Zane

Sword of Mana, Heroine's name: Riska

Legend of Mana, Hero's name: Issac

Legend of Mana, Heroine's name: Lilith


Main Main Characters:

(Stero typical female... sorry.)

Name: Esther
Age: 17
Sex: Female
Race: Human (?)
Class: Sage
Weapon: Arrow & Staff
Spirit: Wisp, Aura/Luna, Undine, Shade, Salamander, Gnome, Dryad, Jinn.
Like: The Mana Goddess, Drawing
Dislike: Staying Home
Personality: Calm, sometimes out-going, stubborn, short-temper
Looks: Long wavy brown hair, blue eyes. Her wears a blue dress with green shorts under it, and sandles. Her hair is tied back in a high pony tail. Her wears a pendent givin to her by her father.
Bio: Esther is Zane's daughter. She and her father live in the outskirts of Wendal. They often go to the Mana Santuary with Cibba's powers and clean the sword and say hello to the Mana Tree. Esther doesn't know her mother, and Zane doesn't talk much about her, saying that the past is the past and not to live by it.
(Okay, you should be able to figure out who Esther's mother is... unless your completely and utterly not in tune with the game or just plan stupid.)
Town: Wendal

Name: Kai
Age: 18
Sex: Male
Race: Human (?)
Class: War Lord
Weapon: Long sword.
Spirit: Shade
Like: Darkness, being alone.
Dislike: The Mana Goddess, the Mana Tree
Personality: Quiet, short-tempered, he can be normal and tends to argue with Esther alot. He also has a secret.
Looks: Short black hair with bright red eyes. He normaly wears a red shirt with black pants and a asortment of belts. Over, he wears a black clock with his sword on his back.
Bio: Complete history unknown. He arrived at Wendal and follows Esther on her journy. He does have a dark secret.
Town: Unknown.

Main Characters:

Name: Mitil
Age: 27
Sex: Female
Race: Human
Class: Death Hand
Weapon: Gloves
Spirit: Gnome
Likes: cloud gazing
Dislikes: Vampires, People who don't listen.
Personality: Smart, quick to speak, and tends to know more then see lets on.
Looks: Short red hair in a pixie cut and green eyes. She normaly is in a long grey tunic and red pants with a large wieghted bracelets.
Bio: Mitil is a average, ordinary, soilder in the Granz army. Mitil is on her way to Wendal to meet with one of her friend's friend. However, she never guesses what she might encounter.
Town: Jadd/Granz Relm

Name: Toya
Age: 16
Sex: Male
Race: Jumi
Class: Rogue
Weapon: Flail
Spirit: Dryad
Personality: At first meet, Toya can be shy and quiet, but as he gets to know someone, he becomes more open and much more cute.
Like: Plants, Climbing, Gold
Dislike: Spiders, Rabbite, getting caught
Looks: He has short yellow hair with red eyes. He normaly wears loss, but comfortable cloths. A cream long tunic, brown pants, and sandles is what he normaly wears. His core is hidden under his shirt and covered bandages.
Bio: Toya is a Guardian Jumi with a core of the Topaz. He is currently a theif, which has not gone unknown by Lady Black Pearl. If he hears that something is valuable, he will steal it. His base is, get this, in the most populated city, Geo. He sometimes steals back items that should belong to others and gives them back. He joins Esther and Kai later when they are forced to go to Geo.
Town: Bejewled City/Geo

Name: Nori
Age: 16 (She actaully 160. Really, she's the youngest fairy in over a thousand years.)
Sex: Female
Race: Half fairy, Half human.
Class: Grand Divina
Weapon: Instruments. (Any that seem to fit the time)
Spirits: Wisp, Aura, Undine, Shade, Salamander, Gnome, Jinn, Dryad
Personality: Is is out-going, stubborn, and a bit annoying. Secertive.
Like: The spirits, spending time alone, flying.
Dislike: Death, Bugs.
Looks: long sandy blond hair with blue tear drop bangs. Her eyes are dark blue and fairy like and her ears a longer then a humans and pointed. She is small for a human, about 4'9, and has a pair of wings on her back. She normaly wears all blacks and darkblues.
Bio: Nori is the only half human, half fairy, and is the only one to travil infront of humans. She is looking for something, and that is the main reason she travils with Esther and Kai. The other is to pick on them and point them in the right direction, sence she seems to know alot about what's going on.
Town: Unknown.

Name: Lee
Age: (?)
Sex: Male
Race: Human (?)
Class: Fenrir Knight
Weapon: Lance
Spirit: Luna
Personality: Silent, but nice and protective of friends.
Likes: Unknown
Dislikes: Dragons, Hell
Looks: Short black hair tied in a pony tail at the back, grey eyes. He dresses a dark red tunic over a black long sleeve shirt and black pants.
Bio: Little is known about him. He is a traviling around in search of a life. He is a fighter for hire, and may possibly be trying to kill Esther and Kai. He does follow them and help them from time to time. His intentions may or may not be good.
Town: Underworld

Character that will appear way later:

Name: Neelam
Age: 180
Sex: Male
Race: Jumi
Class: Rune Knight
Weapon: Mace
Spirit: Undine
Personality: He is caring, and is quiet. He is a bit over protective sometimes.
Likes: Music
Dislikes: People who can't grasp reality.
Looks: Long blueish hair tied in a pony tail, with blue eyes. He is slightly pale due to illness. He wears tan puffyish pants with a long navy shirt. His core is an Sapphire.
Bio: Neelam is a Jumi knight who, right now, is turned to stone, having had his core almost damaged beyound repair years ago. And because of that, Jumi's Tears, a power that heals anything, arn't helping that. To keep himself alive long enough to get help, he separted his heart into three different keys and with Nori's help, turned himself into a staute. His body is hidden in the land of fairies.
Town: Unknown.

And no, Neelam and Toya do not hook up. Toya and Lee do. xd


Other Characters:

Name: El
Age: 15
Sex: Female
Fights?: Yes. Uses a household material.
Looks: El has blond hair and blue eyes. She normaly weres a purplish dress with a grey shawl on. She always as a basket with her, and at the bottem of the basket she either has a meat cleaver, or a frying pan.
Bio: El is a Wendal Maiden and has been a close friend to Esther for many many years.
Side: Good

Name: Ram
Age: 18
Sex: Male
Fights?: No. Just gives info.
Looks: Short sandy blong hair with green eyes. Wears a cream tunic and robe.
Bio: Ram is El's older brother, and often assits Esther and El on their advenutres around town. He will support Esther's and and Kai's adventures later.
Side: Good


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PostPosted: Sun Dec 17, 2006 5:14 pm


Six years after Riska became the Mana Tree

Zane walked calmly through the Mana Santuary, the a bundle of flowers resting lightly in his left hand, while his right held tightly onto another hand, that of a six year old girl. Her brown, wavy hair hung loosly from a pink pony tie, and purple eyes shown from under messy bangs. The two walked confendently, fearing none of the monsters that walked across there path. The monster's wouldn't hurt them, they were under Mana's control.
"Papa, where are we going?" The girl asked as she looked around. Plants moved out of their way to form easier entrences into the depth of the Mana Santuary.
Zane smiled sadly. "We're going to the same place we go every year, to see the Mana Tree. Though, you probably don't remember last time do you Esther?"
"Hmmm...." Esther put a finger to her mouth then grinned. "I remember feeling like someone was hugging me when I went there. Kinda like when Isabella hugs me... but with more love. Kinda like your hugs in a girl form." The girl explained, tapping her chin a bit. Zane just smiled.
They walked for a bit more until a large tree loomed before them. Esther pulled her hand away from her father's and ran to the Mana Tree. She threw her small arms around it, giving the tree a hug.
"Hello Mana Tree!" She said before running back to her father. She took his hand and pulled him near the tree. When they were near it, Zane put the flowers in Esther's hand.
"Your turn to give them to her." The girl nodded before running over and placing the flowers at the foot of the Sword of Mana and the Mana Tree. She placed her hands together and bowed. Zane bowed low also, before taking the girls hand and walking away from the tree.
Esther... My daughter....
Esther turned her head as the voice sounded out. Her father didn't seem to notice, but she did. Closing her eyes, she thought,
See you soon Mommy....

Eleven years later

The gates to the Mana Santuary only stayed open for two years after that, and they could be opened anymore. Zane tried every year, but something felt wrong every time he went. He could tell Esther was slowly forgetting about the Mana Tree, and that scared him. The story of Mana was being lost again, and there was nothing he could do but to let it go.
Maybe it's for the best Esther forgets... He thought sadly as he heard footsteps coming down the stairs of there Wendal Home.
Esther rushed down, nearly tripping over the bottom step, to grab a peachpuppy from the table. They didn't live in the Hot House, but they visited there on a normal bases to get fruits, fix weapons and armor, and tlak to little cactus. He had givin Zane his journal after it was filled, and right now, it rested in a locked chest. He was sure Riska would have scolded him for hiding all the things from his daughter, but it was all he could do.
"Papa, I'm going into town to get some more supplies. The dudbears also want me to pick up something for them. And Lil' Cactus needs a new pot." Esther said while tying her sandles up and grabbing her bow and arrows. The peachpuppy had already been eaten. He sighed at how fast she could eat.
"Make sure to get the right one this time. There's Lucre in the brown pouch hanging on the chair." Esther got up, and put the pouch in her pocket, before hugging her father and running out of the house. Zane didn't have to worry about monster's in the Mushroom Forest attacking her. Esther could handle herself, and she had all the spirits to help her.

"I hate mushrooms!" exclaimed Esther as she jumped over the low fence that separted the forest from the town. The mushrooms were one of the worst monsters. Sure, she could handle them, when her spirits decided to actually help. Salamander had decided to sleep, so he wouldn't help her.
"Hey! Esther!" someone called. Esther looked up to see a girl in a large purplish dress with a head shawl run over to her. She carried a basket with a piece of cloth covering it. "Here's what the Dudbears ordered, thought I'd pick it up and give it to you sence I was working. The store's closed. Watts is off again. Probably at another armory." The girl pulled the cloth back and handed Esther a package. It was heavy, and rather lumpy. At a guess, the girl thought it was probably raw weapon material, maybe Granz Steel.
The town of Wendal was a busy place, both at day and night. People walked back and forth shopping, children chased each other while their grandparents scolded them, and store owner handed out leaflets and fliers for stores. Wendal at four or five different stores, then out side shopping areas, one inn, one armory, and a beautiful chruch to the north. There was a staute of the Mana Goddess when a person first enters a town, and a fourtain north of there.
El was smiling. "Wow are the dudbears doing?"
"They're fine. Still greedy little things though." Esther laughed and walked with El, being guided to a stand with pots on it. There was also a few seeds, but Esther had picked up some on the way there.
"Hey, El? Would Lil' Cactus like this one?" Esther asked, picking up a large yellowish pot with little stars on it.
"Nah, he'd probably like orange." The girl said picking up an orange one. Esther payed for it, before wrapping it up in another cloth and holding it under the other arm. She was slightly glad that El hadn't rubbed it in her face about not bringing anything to carrying the items in.
The peace of the city was broken by an ear piercing scream. Taking Esther's full hands, El started to run towards the sound of the scream. In the front of town, just in the little wooden area before Wendal's gates, a group of town's people had flocked in the entrance. If they wanted to see anything, the girl's would have to go over. Frotunaly, both girl's new of a way over, and used the brach hanging over the wall to get to the other side and look on from the trees.
In the wooded area, a group of Granz Soilders were attacking four people. A Topple Grandfather, a Topple Maiden, a Wendal Gentalman and a cloaked traviler. Each of which were unarmed. Well, the travler wouldn't have been, but his sword lay in ruins a ways off.
"They just suddenly attacked when the traviler's said they didn't know where Zane lived after the guards asked. And they wont believe us that they really don't know." Esther looked down to see a Wendal Gentalman, Ram, El's brother, talking to them.
"And due to their reaction, the whole city is also saying they don't know where Zane lives. Zane's helped us alot, so if we told them, and something bad happened, we'd feel bad. But, the soilders said that they would kill these four if they don't tell them. We're walking on edge. Good thing you came." Ram leaned against the wall. The man was always great for knowlade on everything. He could hear something once, and remember it with every detail. He continued. "The traviler with them was fighting, but one of the soilder's broke his sword and threw something at him. He's not doing so hot, so it might have been poisened."
"The soilders don't use poisen..." El muttered while reaching in her basket to grab a frying pan. "Wanna help?" She asked Esther.
"Need to ask? If my families the one that they die for, I'll feel guilty." One hand slipped her bow from around her shoulder's off, while the other hand pulled out an arrow. She nocked it, took aim, and fired at one of the guards.
The arrow missed, but got the guards attention.
"Who's there?!" One called.
"No one?" El stated forming a mock question. Esther jumped out and landed infront of the group.
"What in the Mana Goddess's name is going on?" Esther asked as she nocked another arrow. Her voice held authroity, but it was fake. However, the guards didn't seem to notice that she was lying. ((stupid guards Muhahaha!))
One guard gripped his sword and walked forwards. "We are here to arrest the fighter Zane, and his daughter Esther under the ruler of Granz Relm."
Lord Granz would never arrest us... oh I forgot.... he died a year ago.... another person is in rule.
"On what charges?" The guards faultered, seemily either not knowing the charges, or simply lying that they had to arrest her father and her self. Before a guard or Esther could speak, one of the other guards grabbed the Topple Maiden's arm and dragged her over with his sword on her throat. The traviler and Wendal Gentalman tried to get to her, but they both seemed wounded and lacking any power.
"How about this, you give us Zane and Esther, and we'll spare this girl's life." The offending guard pressed the sword to the women throat a bit, making her wimper a bit. Esther's hand on the bow tightend.
An older, rather senile Wendal Grandfather yelled, "Esther! Don't tell him your Zane's daughter!" There was utter and complete silence before Esther turned her head to the man.
I don't need to...
"Arrest her!" The lead guard yelled. El sprung from the tree and smashed her frying pan into the back of the head of the man with the maiden. Stars shown in his eyes before he fell to the ground. Esther took hold of the distraction and held her bow an arrow up, aiming at the lead man. He glared at her, then let out a whistle. There was a yelp as two guards grabbed El, and more walked out of the trees, blocking the people.
"Give in, or I kill all the towns people." She cursed in her head, and slowly let her bow arm drop.
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