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 Posted: Sun Jun 19, 2005 4:33 pm
Chain poem, I just though this up and well I want to try it. I will write a open ended poem and then the next person will write added to this with a one end. These poems should be flowing (kindof) and a good length I don't like one liners! Want to try it?
The soft coming of the tears
seals my happiness far from my heart.
You left and this weak heart broke,
I have not the might to pull it back together.
I cannot begin to try.
Could you help me try?
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Posted: Sun Jun 19, 2005 5:18 pm
hmm, that's a hard one... it'd be easier if it ryhmed..
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Posted: Sun Jun 19, 2005 5:25 pm
^The soft coming of the tears
^seals my happiness far from my heart.
^You left and this weak heart broke,
^I have not the might to pull it back together.
^I cannot begin to try.
^Could you help me try?
Could you comfort me when I cry?
Could you be my rope
to holds my heart together?
It'd give me hope
if you'd help me try to tether
my heart back together.
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Posted: Mon Jun 20, 2005 9:28 pm
^The soft coming of the tears
^seals my happiness far from my heart.
^You left and this weak heart broke,
^I have not the might to pull it back together.
^I cannot begin to try.
^Could you help me try?
^Could you comfort me when I cry?
^Could you be my rope
^to holds my heart together?
^It'd give me hope
^if you'd help me try to tether
^my heart back together.
I cannot be the everything you need
I can't be what you need
I want you yet my heart is to far.
it is lost in a sea of crisom sorrow
I cannot safe myself
I only wish i can safe you...
(not the best it's too late here)
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