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 Posted: Mon Dec 18, 2006 9:25 am
Examples of edits to already existing threads in that forum.[Volcanic Springs] Near the base of the Volcano lies an averaged sized area filled with hot springs, both small and large. It’s a place of tranquility, relaxation and healing. These springs have been around for hundreds of years, serving as baths, or a place to relax for a while, sometimes after a battle. No conflict between rivaling ninja will be heard of here. This place is known for its peace. Ninja and students are free to roam around these springs, soak in them, and explore their boundaries. please go to a thread designed for sparring. Same Gaian rules apply. Guild rules as well. If you haven’t already read those please do so.> [Keono Waterfalls] The Keono Waterfalls, located between the Soarean River, and the Volcanic Springs, is just as it sounds really. They lie in the middle of a Forrest, behind tropical trees and growth. This area is a great training spot, because of the different obstacles a ninja may face. These obstacles vary from poisonous plants you could mistake as food, to wild animals such as boars or jaguars. The Keono Waterfalls are a beautiful sight. If you don’t stay to train you should at LEAST stay a bit to swim or watch the falls. There are exactly four waterfalls. Two drop straight down, and the other two flow down a ‘rocky hill’ you could say. read those please do so.> Volcanic Raman Bar [The Hottest Around]
[Raman Bar & Inn] Here is a place for ninja, students and villagers to grab a bite to eat, socialize, and rest. Don’t bother ordering your food or reserving a room for yourself. This place was made by volunteering villagers who wanted to have a place for travelers, as well as the poor and hungry. Because of this, everything here is free for everyone. So please, help yourself and enjoy your stay. already read those please do so.> Example of an rp post, it's from an angel Vs demon rp i joined. .Orgasmic.Plushie. This is an example from one of the rp's i'm in Kanna stepped lightly through a small Stream. Although she had the gift of fire, she adored water. Water, her opposite, but so cold and refreshing. Kanna felt the water rush past her heels, then her toes. It felt nice. She had been walking for some time now. Never having a destination, just walking. Kanna enjoyed walking, almost as much as flying. She gets restless sitting in one spot for too long. Kanna continued walking, passing by small trees and large, as well as beautiful flowers and many diffrent animals. Soon, she reached an opening in the woods. At first there was just a sun beam shooting in her face, but when she shaded her eyes she came to see a small pond which the stream led to, and an open feild. She paused, and sighed a soft sigh, before sitting down on a small boulder next the the pond. Kanna put her feet into the water, placed her hands in her lap, and looked towards the skies. ♥.~*~. ¡MUAH! .~*~.♥
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Posted: Mon Dec 18, 2006 9:38 am
My ProfileName: Kanna Renosai Age: 15 Gender: female Rank- whatever i'm given from the kage's Personality: Content, Seriouse, hardworking, a leader, loyal, honest, sometimes stubborn or naive, and above all dedicated. Powers/Weapons: power- fire ((rarely ever uses it) weapon- two kodachi or one katana w. the usual shuriken, kunai, needles, etc.. and of course, she knows martial arts and jutsu Bio: Due to an accident Kanna was orphaned at age three. Ever since then she had trained to become a better fighter. Because she was an orphan she was looked down upon as both a ninja, and a villager. She left the home when she was ten to train on her own, away from any distractions. When she was one 14. It seemed everyone had forgotten her, but she made herself known. Apperance:  ♥.~*~. ¡MUAH! .~*~.♥
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ookami bouji Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Dec 18, 2006 12:51 pm
If anyone should be the Kazankage it should be me. I mean I've been here since practically the beginning and still one of the most active ones her, you know how hard i've worked and how I've improved, and my character already fits it.
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Posted: Mon Dec 18, 2006 2:20 pm
"Yes, but AJ, there are a few things...
First, you are a close friend of mine. So if I pick you, some other people would say the same thing you are saying right now.
You still have stuff to polish up on...like your spelling and puncuation.
Also I need to see some thread-making skills from you...
The others and I have talked before...we really don't want anymore female Kage. I really don't want the Volcano Village to go Kage-less for no more than 24 hours since I planned to make the guild active again...so the decision I'm making will be one of a rush.
It's a shame, after Tyrent finally quits complaining about becoming a Vice Captian, and after he finally starts to help out...he quits. Another things that pisses my off about that is that him, Genji, and Sion were in the middle of something...so I believe. Genji hasn't been around in a couple of weeks either...son, this is life."
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ookami bouji Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Dec 18, 2006 2:26 pm
Ryukinzo "Yes, but AJ, there are a few things...
First, you are a close friend of mine. So if I pick you, some other people would say the same thing you are saying right now.
You still have stuff to polish up on...like your spelling and puncuation.
Also I need to see some thread-making skills from you...
The others and I have talked before...we really don't want anymore female Kage. I really don't want the Volcano Village to go Kage-less for no more than 24 hours since I planned to make the guild active again...so the decision I'm making will be one of a rush.
It's a shame, after Tyrent finally quits complaining about becoming a Vice Captian, and after he finally starts to help out...he quits. Another things that pisses my off about that is that him, Genji, and Sion were in the middle of something...so I believe. Genji hasn't been around in a couple of weeks either...son, this is life."
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Posted: Mon Dec 18, 2006 2:43 pm
"Let me rephrase that, inproper word usage...it's something that Microsoft Word doesn't notice, because it is a mechine/program, not a human. I noticed several times that you used 'witch' instead of 'which'...and you often have capitalization errors..."
"If you can fill out the application like she did, then MAYBE you can become the next Kazankage. But if you do, you won't be able to use the current character you have in my village until well after he becomes a Legendary Shinobi. Meaning you'll have to wait, or make a new character on a new account...this is for post-number perposes."
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ookami bouji Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Dec 18, 2006 3:05 pm
Ryukinzo "Let me rephrase that, inproper word usage...it's something that Microsoft Word doesn't notice, because it is a mechine/program, not a human. I noticed several times that you used 'witch' instead of 'which'...and you often have capitalization errors..."
"If you can fill out the application like she did, then MAYBE you can become the next Kazankage. But if you do, you won't be able to use the current character you have in my village until well after he becomes a Legendary Shinobi. Meaning you'll have to wait, or make a new character on a new account...this is for post-number perposes."
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Posted: Mon Dec 18, 2006 4:26 pm
"AJ, you're missing the point...give me a really good RP sample, revamp 3 threads from the Kazankagure, and post a profile for the 2nd Kazankage...post that all in here.
Yes, but there is a very small chance of that happening. Wait...it says ANBU? I'll add it to LS as well."
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ookami bouji Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Dec 18, 2006 4:35 pm
Whatever, forget it I'll just do what i was originally going to do. Wait until late ANBU or early LS then go to the Watarimono Lands.............. I'm already a Kage in every other one of the naruto guilds I'm part of....
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Posted: Mon Dec 18, 2006 6:48 pm
Okay guys. I'm going to try this RP contest. If I may I might make another, but I'll ask before I do that.
Kinnera lept onto another tree. He accidently landed on a loose branch, and it shook making leaves fly in every direction. The way the wind blew them blow it seemed as if they were dancing. It was a truely mesmerizing sight. Kinnera couldn't see it though. He was completely blind, yet he was a great ninja. He had to have been, he was on a mission for the Kage. A sound made his ear twitch, and he jumped on the ground. He heard the same noise again in the bushes, and spun around to face it. The wind blew his bangs above his head, showing his pure white eyes. He could have easily been mistaken for a Hyuga. The noise grew as he walked towards it. He pulled out a katana and held it away from his body. There was defanitly a creature in the bushes. He cut the upper half off the bush to reveal none other than a squirrel. Sometimes he really hated his extremely advanced hearing.
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Posted: Mon Dec 18, 2006 7:35 pm
Here is the threads I was told to edit.Sohma Estate Sohma Estate is a very large estate where all the members of the Sohma family are free to live. The head building is located in the northern part of the landscape. It is a very beautiful sight to behold, there is a large lake located in the northern and southern parts of the property. There is also a very large garden where you will find all sorts of plants, herbs, and foods. anybody is free to pick the plants growing in the garden, so drop by and pay a visit to this lovely home. Soarean River Hey what do you know a place to swim. If you love to have fun in the sun, this is the place to do it. There are so many things to do. I mean, oh yeah, you can swim. But wouldn't it be more fun to climb a 50 foot tree, then jump into the lake from the top. SPLASH! You can also spar, and socialize with friends. Theres more than plenty of room to spar. The main thing to do here is have fun, and enjoy the beautiful landscape. Volcanic Hot Springs The Volcanic springs is a place where people can come and just realx. They can just float utop the water, and forget all their worries. The volcanic spring water is so soothing to the mind and body that it helps people heal from big battles. There are several springs. The largest spring has a huge waterfall flowing down onto 3 large rocks. These rocks are perfect for meditating. Theres only one rule: NO SKINNY DIPPING!
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Posted: Mon Dec 18, 2006 8:11 pm
Kinnera Here is the threads I was told to edit.Sohma Estate Sohma Estate is a very large estate where all the members of the Sohma family are free to live. The head building is located in the northern part of the landscape. It is a very beautiful sight to behold, there is a large lake located in the northern and southern parts of the property. There is also a very large garden where you will find all sorts of plants, herbs, and foods. anybody is free to pick the plants growing in the garden, so drop by and pay a visit to this lovely home. Soarean River Hey what do you know a place to swim. If you love to have fun in the sun, this is the place to do it. There are so many things to do. I mean, oh yeah, you can swim. But wouldn't it be more fun to climb a 50 foot tree, then jump into the lake from the top. SPLASH! You can also spar, and socialize with friends. Theres more than plenty of room to spar. The main thing to do here is have fun, and enjoy the beautiful landscape. Volcanic Hot Springs The Volcanic springs is a place where people can come and just realx. They can just float utop the water, and forget all their worries. The volcanic spring water is so soothing to the mind and body that it helps people heal from big battles. There are several springs. The largest spring has a huge waterfall flowing down onto 3 large rocks. These rocks are perfect for meditating. Theres only one rule: NO SKINNY DIPPING! The Sohma estate is someone's house (9)
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ookami bouji Vice Captain
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Doll van de Doden Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Dec 18, 2006 9:10 pm
I say she would fit the part of a kage perfectly. Her edits are great and so is her roleplay post. But if she doesn't fit Kage she could atleast become the assistant kage of the village. Aside from that I personally don't recall hearing about no more female kage's.
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Posted: Mon Dec 18, 2006 10:23 pm
"That's what I was thinking.
We established this before you became a member of the guild."
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Posted: Tue Dec 19, 2006 12:20 am
[A.N.B.U] A.J. the great If anyone should be the Kazankage it should be me. I mean I've been here since practically the beginning and still one of the most active ones her, you know how hard i've worked and how I've improved, and my character already fits it.
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