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 Posted: Mon Jun 20, 2005 10:44 am
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Down by the water there's an old wooden dock
Andy stands and watches the stars fall from the sky
The broken glass shines like his broken dreams should
Shaking and falling, he wishes he could fly
Prec:
There he is standing all alone
In the moonlight he searches for something he's lost
He could drown in this silence; he could drown in his thoughts
He could drown but he wants to make up for his loss
C:
Please, can you tell me where I go from here?
'Cause I've never been good with this sort of thing
Got my hand on the bottle and my heart on my sleeve
Think I'm ready to feel what I've never believed
Yea, I never believed, no, I never believed
V:
He comes around every once in awhile
Drops a postcard in the mail
(And) he doesn't feel what he should sometimes
But that don't matter when he fails
Prec:
There he stands with his head in his hands
He can't sleep 'cause of all the noise in his head
He could drown in this moment; in the words that they said
He could drown but he's tired of running from them
C:
Please, can you tell me where I go from here?
'Cause I've never been good with this sort of thing
Got my hand on the bottle and my heart on my sleeve
Think I'm ready to feel what I've never believed
Yea, I never believed, no, I never believed
Bridge/Verse/Chorus/Whatever:
Haven't been home in a real long time
I think its better that way sometimes
And I don't feel nothing, I can't feel nothing,
Except these scars that won't leave me be
Well I've got nothing to complain about,
I've got nothing I can hurt about
There's nothing I can do, to find my way back to you
And I never believed, no, I never believed
Ending Chorus:
Please, can you tell me where I go from here?
'Cause I've never been good with this sort of thing
Got my hand on the bottle and my heart on my sleeve
Think I'm ready to feel what I've never believed
No I never believed, No, God, I wish I believed (fade out)
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Posted: Fri Jun 24, 2005 8:54 pm
It reads well, and since I can't exactly hear how it's suppose to go I sort of had to think of my own rhythm. Still, it flows very well (probably better when the actual rhythm is known) and is sounds good. Keep up the good work!
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Posted: Tue Jul 05, 2005 12:20 pm
interesting rhyme scheme. nice lyrics
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Posted: Fri Jul 08, 2005 6:16 pm
Wow, I've never seen anyone post lyrics here. I like the new thing. I really liked this. It didn't always rhyme, but when I think of songs, most don't always rhyme. It was a very good song and I wish I could hear it put to music. Keep up the good work, maybe I'll hear this over the radio some day. biggrin
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Posted: Sun Jul 10, 2005 5:21 pm
Very good song lyrics. Good use of repitition and rhtym. I try to write poetry sometimes, but I am no good at lyrics.
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Posted: Wed Jul 13, 2005 9:07 pm
Maybe someday, you could find a way to post sheet music (a picture or something) so we can figure out how it's supposed to sound.
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