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 Posted: Tue Jun 21, 2005 3:27 pm
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Posted: Fri Jun 24, 2005 9:24 pm
Wow, that was really good. It was full of so much emotion! The ending was a little rocky, but still good. A bit dark, but good.
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Posted: Sat Jun 25, 2005 10:26 pm
Cereah Wow, that was really good. It was full of so much emotion! The ending was a little rocky, but still good. A bit dark, but good.
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Posted: Wed Jul 06, 2005 12:48 pm
Again, no punctuation...and I fail to see why you capitalized every single line, you...capitalist, you!
Your rhyming was again, very smooth, almost effortless. I'm looking foreward to seeing part three.
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Posted: Wed Jul 06, 2005 1:14 pm
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