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 Posted: Sat Dec 30, 2006 6:39 pm
Ok, this is my first fanfiction and I'm still working on it.
Genre: Romance/Humor/Action/Adventure
Rating: I'd say T
~Couples~
Main:
Hikura X Jiang Wei
Xing Xing X Zhao Yun
Ten Kou X Ma Chao
Later:
Ten Kou X Lu Xun (and if you're thinking Ten Kou is two timing, you're wrong. It's a little hard to explain so you'll have to read the fanfiction)
Short Summary: (OK, so maybe not short, but hey....)
Hikura is the daughter of the Shu Kingdom's emperor, so her life is mainly repeated day after day. She is woken up early in the day to go to various ceremonies. After the first is over, she is to prepare for another, but instead, her friends, Xing Xing and Jiang Wei sneak her out of the Shu castle before she is fetched.
As the war for control over the land of Han China furthers, issues take place in the Shu Kingdom and in Hikura's life.
Here are some things that you might want to know about my fanfiction:
1)Every chapter is supposed to be a day or so in the beginning, but furtherin the fanfiction, I feel like skipping days.
2)The story is told by someone's point of veiw at most times.
3)Every chapter beings at Hikura's (main character) POV unless I label so.
I'll add more to this later or when I feel like it.
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Posted: Sat Dec 30, 2006 6:44 pm
Here's the first chapter to my fanfiction. Hope you like it!
Chapter 1 ~The Daily Routine With a Twist~
I was sitting quietly during a stupid ceremony blocking out my father's speaking...I was anxious to get out and meet Xing Xing in my room. I looked across the room and saw my idiot brother making stupid faces at some statue.
My name is Hikura. At a young age, I traveled the lands of Han China. My whole village was burned to the ground by bandits. I was the only surviver. I last traveled to a village under the Shu Kingdom. Well, I almost did, but I had fainted a few yards away from the entrance.
I was lucky that Xing Xing, Ten Kou, Ma Chao, Zhao Yun, and Jiang Wei were inspecting the village. Jiang Wei had spotted me and told the others. I was brought back to the Shu castle and was given care until I fully healed.
Then, Liu Bei, the Shu emperor, adopted me. I trained with Xing Xing and Ten Kou most of the time I was here and got to know all of the Shu officers.
Me and Jiang Wei were about the same age. Everyone was older than us other than Guan Ping and Xing Cai.
Everyday since I came to Shu, Jiang Wei would always visit me. I would always want to leave and play with him, but I had to go to ceremonies. That's why Xing Xing and Jiang Wei would always help me sneak out.
A few minutes later, the ceremony was over and I dashed out as soon as possible. When I opened the door, I accidently crashed into Ma Chao and my friend Ten Kou.
"Ouch." I said, rubbing my head. I got up and reached to help Ten Kou up, but Ma Chao beat me to her.
"I'm so sorry, I was in a little hurry." I said to both of them.
"That's ok." Said Ten Kou brushing herself from the fall. Ten Kou was such a nice friend. She doesn't really get too mad all the time, but she was really forgiving.
I bowed and left the two. I opened my bedroom door and saw Xing Xing and Jiang Wei waiting in my room.
"Sorry I'm late, I had to go to a stupid ceremony." I said.
"We know, Zhao Yun told us. He's the new guard leader." Xing Xing said.
"What? Zhao Yun is the new guard leader? Oh, this is bad," I said. "What if he gets suspicious?! Then we can't sneak out anymore!" I was pacing around my room. I didn't want to stay in the castle all the time.
Just then, Ten Kou came in.
"So you sneak out without Lord Liu Bei's permission?" Ten Kou said with a smile on her face.
We were so busted!!!
"Please Ten Kou, don't tell Lord Liu Bei, I'm begging you!" I said.
"Don't worry, I won't tell. Besides I wouldn't want to be stuck sitting during boring ceremonies either." Ten Kou said. I knew she was trying to make some joke out of that. Still, I was releaved that she wasn't going to tell anyone.
"Well, now that that's over, lets get going, before Hikura has to go to another ceremony." Jiang Wei said.
"Sure, lets go. Ten Kou, would you like to come with us?" I asked her.
"Ok," she replied. "Ma Chao, you distract Zhao Yun while we sneak out. After we leave successfully, follow." Ten Kou ordered Ma Chao. Ma Chao left just then. We followed him a few feet away.
Ma Chao started talking to Zhao Yun at the palace gates. We got out without Zhao Yun noticing. Ma Chao followed like ordered, leaving Zhao Yun clueless.
We arrived at a large field that spread across the land for miles probably. There was a stream close by. Tons of fish swam in there. I fished here the last time I snuck out with Xing Xing and Jiang Wei.
Just then, Ma Chao had whistle very loudly.
"Why'd you do that?" I asked him.
Xing Xing answered before Ma Chao could. "I think I know why." she said and pointed in a direction where a cloud of dirt was becoming larger.
Just then, standing right next to Ma Chao was a white stallion.
"You love that thing, don't you Ma Chao?" Jiang Wei teased.
Ma Chao just ignored Jiang Wei's comment and got on his stallion. He started to show off on his stallion. I was starting to laugh as I watched Ma Chao riding around.
The five of us played and joked around until dinner was nearing. I had a great time out in the fields that day.
When we came close to the palace, only soldiers were on guard now.
"There are too much of them, lets get in by my bedroom window." I whispered.
We got in my bedroom and heard someone coming up the hall. I took out a deck of cards and we started playing. Then Yue Ying opened the door.
"What are you doing? It's time to eat, come on, Lord Liu Bei is waiting." she said and we followed her to the dining hall. Everyone had just come and taken their seats. Everyone ate dinner in silence.
Just then, Lord Liu Bei made an anouncement. "I will need to speak with Zhuge Liang, Liu Chan, Yue Ying, Jiang Wei, Hikura, Xing Xing, Zhao Yun, Ma Chao, and Ten Kou after dinner in the strategy room."
He sounded serious to me. After a few minutes, everyone was done with dinner and the eight that were summoned met at the strategy room.
"We should plan to attack Wei soon, they are taking much of the land already. We have to stop them." Liu Bei said.
"We should form an alliance with Wu. That way, we'll take down Wei for sure." Zhuge Liang demanded.
The discussion went on for hours. At the end, Zhuge Liang had his way. We were going to have a meeting with Wu at some time. When the discussion was over, I was tired and headed to my room to sleep.
That night, I was so exhausted that I fell asleep the moment I laid my head on my pillow.
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Posted: Sun Dec 31, 2006 11:08 am
Chapter 2 ~Things Get Messed Up~
I woke up with the sun shinning at my face. As soon as I woke up, Yue Ying knocked on my bedroom door. "Hikura, are you awake? Get dressed! You have another ceremony to attend to!"
"I'm awake. I'll get dressed soon." I told her.
"Ok, but hurry up!" she said and walked away.
Just then, Xing Xing came into my room. "Hikura, do you think you can get out today?"
"I'd love to, but sadly no. I have another ceremony to go to" I answered her.
"How many ceremonies have you been to this week? Is this your sixth?" she asked.
"Actually, its my eighth, but who's counting?" I joked. "Well, I have to get dressed fast, or Yue Ying is going to come in and dress me herself."
Xing Xing laughed, "Ok, but come here once the ceremony is over, got it?"
"Where else would I go?" I joked again. Xing Xing smiled and left. I got dressed and headed towards the ceremony room.
I bumped into Huang Zhong on my way. "Ah. I see that the youthful are dressing elegently today." he joked. "Another ceremony?" he asked. I nodded. "Then you better get on your way." he said and left.
I arrived at the ceremony room and had to sit. I knew my feet would fall asleep soon. They've been doing that everytime I sat for these ceremonies. As my father was blabbing away, I blocked him out, as always. Before I let my mind float off, I looked across the room to see what my idiot brother, Liu Chan was doing.
Once again, he was making stupid faces at a lion statue. Obiously, he would never keep the Shu Kingdom strong when he takes the throne. If we were going to get attacked when he takes over, we're all dead. Maybe that's why Liu Bei adopted me, so the Shu Kingdom would live during an attack.
This ceremony was going to last forever, like every other one that I've sat through since Liu Bei adopted me. Well, I didn't listen to them anyways. I just let my mind float off.
I wonder how I'm going to sneak out this time. Since I forgot to lock my bedroom door, Zhuge Liang saw that my room was empty after Jiang Wei told him that he was visiting me, he told Liu Bei about it and had more guards on duty to make sure I wouldn't leave anymore.
After a long time thinking of plans to sneak out, the ceremony was over and Liu Bei had excused us.
Once I walked out of the ceremony doors, I ran for my room. Since I didn't really look where I was going, I bumped into Jiang Wei in the hall.
"Ow. Jiang Wei, are you alright?" I asked.
"I'm just fine. What about you Hikura?" he asked.
"Other than falling into you, I'm fine." I replied.
"Oh, Hikura, what are you doing on the ground?" I turned and saw Xing Xing standing next to me.
"What are you doing here Xing Xing?" I asked her.
"I was just on my way to your room. You?" she asked.
"Same here, the ceremony just ended." I told her.
"Can we save the chatting for when we get in Hikura's room?" Jiang Wei interupted holding his hand out to help me up.
"Hey guys," Ten Kou said. "Why is Hikura on the floor?"
I grabed hold of Jiang Wei's hand and got up before anyone else would come and ask why I was on the floor. Then we went to my room.
"What are we going to do? There are more guards and not alot of us!" I said.
"I've been looking around, there are some weak points in the guard pattern....." Jiang Wei said.
"Well hurry up and tell us so we can sneak out already!" Xing Xing yelled.
"Um, about that......" Jiang Wei said scratching the back of his head.
"Well, what about it?!" Ten Kou yelled as well.
"I didn't really record the information yet..." Jiang Wei said.
"What?????!!!!!!!" Xing Xing and Ten Kou yelled. "Why didn't you????!!!!!" They were so mad that they were about to take a chair and hit Jiang Wei with it.
I stood between the chaos. "Um, guys, there's no need to take out your anger by hitting Jiang Wei with a chair. Besides, you should be thanking him for checking the whole palace for how the guards are positioned."
They lowered the chair. They were still mad, I could see Xing Xing practically clawing the sides of the chair. Ten Kou was doing the same.
"Ok, now that you two have calmed down a little, what are we going to do?" I said, trying to prevent another rampage.
Just then, Liu Bei came in and wanted to speak to all of us, inculding Ma Chao, so he entered too.
"I need to talk to the five of you," Liu Bei said.
We were busted!!! I just know that he wanted to talk to us about sneaking me out.
"What is it Lord Liu Bei?" Ma Chao asked him.
"We are going to travel to the land of Wu soon," Liu Bei answered.
What????!!!! I thought he was going to bust us, but instead, he's talking to us about something else. I was freaking out in my head for nothing!!! At least this still means that we can still sneak out.
"When?" Ten Kou added.
"It depends on Lord Zhuge Liang." Liu Bei replied.
Then he left.
"Why are we going to the Wu Kingdom?" Xing Xing asked.
"I don't know, but I think someone does...." I said and looked at Jiang Wei. Soon, everyone faced him.
"What is that startegist up to Jiang Wei????!!!!! Huh????!!!!" Xing Xing demanded while she took him by his shirt collar and started shaking him rapidly.
"Um, Xing Xing, you shouldn't be doing that...." I said trying to stop her.
"He knows something!!!! And he's not telling us!!!!" she said still shaking him.
"I DON'T KNOW!!!!!!!!!" Jiang Wei yelled. Then, Xing Xing froze and loosened her grip.
"Um, Xing Xing?" I said waving my hand infront of her face.
"Ten Kou?" Ma Chao said. I faced her. She was frozen two.
Suddenly, they attacked Jiang Wei. Ma Chao and I were trying to restrain them.
"What the hell do you mean you don't know?????!!!!!" they both yelled, trying to claw at Jiang Wei.
"Guys, calm down." I said.
They didn't listen.
"Jiang Wei, RUN!!!!" Ma Chao and I yelled at him and Xing Xing and Ten Kou broke free from our grips.
Jiang Wei ran out of the room and into the palace halls that I call a maze. Xing Xing and Ten Kou were right on his track gaining speed.
Just then, when Jiang Wei was running, an arm came out of a door way and grabbed Jiang Wei in. Xing Xing and Ten Kou just ran by.
"Master Zhu-" Jiang Wei was about to yell but Zhuge Liang cut him off.
"You shouldn't be running around in the palace, you might hurt someone." Zhuge Liang lectured.
"Master!!! It wasn't my fault!!! I had to run or they would kill me!!!" Jiang Wei tried to reason.
"Yes, I know, she told me all about it." Zhuge Liang said.
"Who?" Jiang Wei asked and looked over Zhuge Liang's shoulder.
I was sitting across the room.
"Hikura? When did you get here?" Jiang Wei asked.
"During your little exercise." Zhuge Liang said answering for me.
"So, Zhuge Liang, exactly why are we going to the Wu Kingdom?" I asked, interupting there little conversation.
"That is for me to know and you to find out..." Zhuge Liang replied.
"But-"
"Enough." Zhuge Liang said and left.
The two of us also left the room. When we opened the door, Xing Xing and Ten Kou were sitting infront of the door panting.
"You two done yet?" I joked. They just laid on the floor and caught their breathe. Then Ma Chao ran over panting.
"Where were you?" Jiang Wei asked. Ma Chao didn't answer, he just laid on the floor too.
"Yeah, they're on the floor but no one notices them." I said.
"Hikura." Ma Chao said. "When I was running after them. I saw that there were no guards."
Xing Xing had just jumped up at that moment. "Really? Don't mess around with me Ma Chao!" Xing Xing warned.
"This means that Hikura can go out at any time for now." Ten Kou interrupted.
"Then what are we waiting for people?!" Xing Xing said and pulled us all to the castle gates.
Before we left, Ten Kou packed us all a lunch and dinner.
The whole day we played, trained, joked around, and talked.
When the sun was down and it became dark, we finally got back to the castle.
Then we all said goodnight and went to sleep.
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Ok, that was chapter 2. That's most of what I can have up for now, I'll try to have the rest up ASAP when I find my flashdrive... sweatdrop
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Posted: Mon Jan 15, 2007 10:03 am
I guess no one is interested in my fanfiction.....Oh well.
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Posted: Mon Feb 05, 2007 11:09 am
just read both chapter You played the characters very well somthing i can never do. Kepp up the good work.
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Posted: Mon Feb 05, 2007 4:57 pm
Thanks. ^_^ I just normally go with what I think about the characters...
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