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 Posted: Sun Dec 31, 2006 3:35 pm
Yes you people.... you have heard right. This is where I shall post new chapters or plot lines of Doctor Clean. Many of you know that Doctor Clean is a character in the LOSI, but many of you don't know that Doctor Clean was a hero created by me two years ago at a summer camp. Yes... he was created to stop little kids from terrorizing the leader of our Acting Group at camp. It worked successfully and now this year at camp after two years of Doctor Clean, there might be a week named after him in honor of me and of course a regular in the LOSI plot line, Mike, who helped me out in creating plot lines for this character. This discussion will deal with new ideas for plot lines in this coming up summer's "The New Adventures of the Old Doctor Clean."
I shall post almost every week some new plot line, which I will be working on at home, I need your input and I would love some critiques. Thank you and I hope you enjoy some of my plots.
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Posted: Sun Dec 31, 2006 4:55 pm
You may want to hold off on this for a while, Clean.
It's groovy that you and Mike met at camp though, that's where He, Atrox, and I met as well. Coincidentally, it was a drama camp at another religious camp (i had mike fill me in on the details after the similarities between how you and he and he and i met sketched me out quite a bit... sweatdrop ) Anyhow...
you may want to hold off on telling others your plot ideas. Give it a week or so.
Unless it suddenly occurs to me these plotlines have nothing to do with LoSI. In which case, share away!
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Posted: Sun Dec 31, 2006 8:56 pm
I'd love to get a peek at your work... I'm moving this over to "RP OOC" however...
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Posted: Sun Dec 31, 2006 9:29 pm
I shall now give you background information and a basic origin about how Doctor Clean became a hero. The summer of 2005, Mike Andres, one of our friends' Andrew Cudgma, and I were in charge of an Acting Group in our camp. The little kids the first day were out of control and they were just plain horrible. Mike and Andrew complained that we needed something to get their attention. I had noticed that the little kids seemed to like super heroes a lot. Now the entire problem was coming up with a hero who was not only believable, but not cheesy, but ALSO not violent because of course, this was a church camp. So we put our heads together and Mike and Andrew came up with one, while I came up with a man who was turned into a hero who had a vacuum come out of his back and disinfectent come out of his powerful spray guns.
Andrew was persistent in keeping the hero and story he had come up with for his super hero... Mike and I liked Doctor Clean.... so in the end, Mike and I won and Andrew only went along because we gave the part of Doctor Clean/John Johnson away to him.
The next morning, Tuesday, we gave our idea to the camp counciler and immediately we improvized the entire first episode. We practiced the first one over and over, adding things along the way until the first group came. It was an instant success and almost every group enjoyed the skit. Our friend was Doctor Clean, while Mike was the bad guy, Toxic Boy (which many of you know to be the current villian in the Doctor Clean storyline), and I, myself was the narrator and any other part. It was a success!
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Posted: Sun Dec 31, 2006 9:53 pm
Doctor Clean started a HUGE hype with the kids. Many kids that go to the camp only know Mike, Andrew, and I by our character names. The first week of our Doctor Clean episodes contained a beginning, middle, and conclusion. The beginning usually centered around Doctor Clean developing a semi-plot usually about his powers. The beginning also mainly featured the next new bad guy and usually his origins (always played by Mike), the middle contained John walking around when the bad guy would come and attack Doctor Clean. Clean would usually almost be defeated and the bad guy would walk away triumphant. The conclusion contained Clean finally finding baddies weakness and destroying bad guy. As the narrator I would naturally be talking most of the time. Mike and I came up with the bad guys for the next three days. the bad guys in this order were Toxic Boy, Dust Bunne, Candy Man, and the horrible "The Boss." Each one was a TRIUMPTH and the kids loved them and now the last part of this post, on Thurday we started to find that we mainly focused a lot on the bad guy and that Johnson didn't really have his fair share of stage time so we created his counter part, Drew Dubberbury, played by me, and the boss, Mr. Snottsborn, played by Mike. Drew and Snottsborn weren't big in Thursday's episode, but on Friday we decided to step it up and have John fired from his job as a scientist and put as a janitor with Drew, (you might remeber something liek this happening in my plot, but in my plot Drew takes his job, while in the camp plot Drew IS a janitor with John.) Drew was in secret the world famous Atomic Spit-Boy and in the finale of Friday's episode became Doctor Clean's side-kick.
(THERE IS A REASON I AM TELLING YOU ALL THIS)
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Posted: Mon Jan 01, 2007 6:07 pm
Now here is the reason I bring this topic to the OOC RP discussion. In the next few days I shall be posting ideas I have for this camp coming up and I ask you guys to give me some feedback. Be honest with me and also remeber if some of the stuff sounds corny or G or even a little PG rated... it's because not only will Mike, me, and company be preforming this at a Church Camp, but we will also be preforming this mostly for little kids. I gave you the background of the first year we did the Doctor Clean skits because this year's summer camp will have about 20 minute long skits with a bigger story arch and more characters, only it is retelling about Doctor Clean's original adventures. I hope you all enjoy what will come!
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Posted: Fri Jan 05, 2007 7:10 pm
It sounds enjoyable. I think they should enjoy it.
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