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Posted: Mon Jan 01, 2007 12:39 am
Hey. I don't know if anyone here has posted this topic before. I did a check but Didn't find anything. So don't yell at me if it's a repeat! Anyway. This the thread for OC's, otherwise called, original characters that you've created for the Naruto universe. I've created one which I'm currently writing a fanfic about. Name- Ayishchiyo Kamilek (family name first) Age- 12 Sex- Male Rank- Genin (duh) Teammates- Shijo Nomi, Joukaku Kembo. (same as above) Powers- It's discovered very early on that Kamilek will never be a powerful ninja, he had the smallest potential chakra out of his entire class at the academy (was in the same class as Naruto). But later on he discovers he has... other powers. Personality- Kamilek was best friends with Nomi as far back as they could remember. And he's very loyal to her, and although Kembo annoys him no end, he would still protect him with his life. Kamilek wants to earn the admiration of his friends. But is constantly frustratered by his weakness. He is also infatuated with Hinata, but her love for Naruto causes him further frustration. Although he finds Naruto annoying and dismisses him, he subconciously uses Naruto as a way of making himself feel better, by stating that Naruto is weaker than him, but when he sees Naruto's performance at the third stage of the Chuunin exams, this is a triggering point for Kamilek that causes him to spiral into a depression.  Or otherwise, my current AVI.
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Posted: Mon Jan 01, 2007 3:36 am
The only OCs Reya makes are lovechilds. confused
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Posted: Mon Jan 01, 2007 3:37 am
Well, you can include those. As long as you made them up smile
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Posted: Mon Jan 01, 2007 11:53 am
I love your OC, Macroth! ^^ He seems to fit right into the Naruto universe. XD
Warning: Total Randomness ahead
Meh, I have created a couple OCs. Both are named Seras, but with two totally different stories (both cross over with Invader ZIM somehow. sweatdrop )
Seras #1: Not a ninja. Naruto's cousin. Parents unknown. Lives with a foster family in the hidden star village. Knows IZ and GIR.
Seras #2: Star Nin. She and her teammates go on 'Space missions' with Zim and GIR instead of regular ninja missions.
ninja Yep, an OC in the Naruto world crossing over with Invader ZIM. Why? I dunno. Because I think it'll be interesting to see some cool Sci-Fi in the Naruto universe. And what better than with IZ? XDD
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Posted: Mon Jan 01, 2007 5:37 pm
[_Edited_] It's family name first now, because one of my other OC's name sounds wierd with her first name first. sweatdrop I also made a couple changes. Nothing big, you might not even notice it.
Oh wow, I have A LOT of OCs. eek Okay, lets start with the first one. 3nodding And I'll add the rest later...
btw, it's in the future, after Naruto's Hokage and marries Hinata
Name: Hyuga Kanata Age: 12 Gender: Female Rank: Genin (not a ninja at the start of the story) Jutsu/Specialty: Gentle fist Taijutsu, Strong Fist Taijutsu, and Byakugan ( rolleyes ) Teamates: Tenjoin Kojiro, Haruka Sensei: Shikamaru (WHOO. blaugh ) Family: Uzumaki Naruto (Father), Hyuga Hinata(mother), Hyuga Hanabi (aunt), Hyuga Hiashi (grandfather), Hyuga Neji (not sure... sweatdrop ) and a little brother. Also, maybe the 4th Hokage, if he really is Naruto's dad. Bio: Kanata is a small girl who learns taijutsu quickly. She is extremely attached to Rock Lee, since he was the one who taught her self defense. Kanata has strong physical abilities, which was easily gained through Lee's training. Using gentle fist and strong fist taijutsu, she contains some sort of harmony in her attacks. Even before enrolling into the ninja academy, Rock Lee and Hinata had already taught her the taijutsu. It made taking down a certain bully on the first day quite easy. ^_^ (Oh, I usually hate bully stories, but the guy wasn't really a bully. He's just a mean person mad ) Kanata doesn't like her father much; she even thinks he hates her. In truth, Naruto just doesn't want his daughter to get hurt. But of course, you can't stop someone who's got the Uzumaki blood in them. ^_^
Name: Yakuno Kojiro Age: 14 Rank: Genin Jutsu/Specialty: Senbone (throwing needles), as well as some medical abilities (He can treat some wounds) Teammates: Haruka, Hyuga Kanata, and a lot more (I'll explain) Sensei: Nara Shikamaru Family: ummm......passed away.....he's an orphan Backround: A genin for about 2 years, Kojiro has been shuffled around from sensei to sensei, teammates to teammates. When he was little, his whole family had died. Afterwards he decided to be a ninja and enrolled in the ninja academy. Now here's where it gets strange: Every person close to him ends up dying sooner or later. Word went out, and now people see him as bad luck. In the last team he had, he thought that they would stay and he finally wasn't bad luck no more. That is, until a cave in killed his sensei and teammate, who happened to be his girlfriend. Haruka was also in his last team, and she vowed not to leave his side after that. Kojiro also believes that his last sensei had grabbed his girlfriend when the cave in happened and purposefully wanted her dead too. Haruka however, tells him not to think this, and would rather have him screaming "I'm bad Luck!!!" over and over again then to hear that. The whole bad luck thing had made it hard for him, Kanata, and Haruka to find a sensei, cause well, nobody wants to die. Fortunately, Shikamaru volunteered.
Name: Kaze no Haruka Age: 13 Rank: Genin Jutsu/Specialty: Her two fans, which are smaller versions of Temari's fans Teammates: Tenjoin Kojiro, Hyuga Kanata, and Kojiro's girlfriend (remaing a mystery until I get up to it) Sensei: Shikamaru, and before him she had another with Koji, but that remains a mystery as well 3nodding Family: Temari (mother), Gaara (Uncle), a cousin under Gaara, and Kankuro (Uncle) Bio: Haruka is someone not to be messed with. She's a very tough girl, and greatly resembles her mother. At the start, she dislikes Kanata for being the daughter to the hokage and the heir to the Hyuga clan. She also didn't like how nice Koji was to her. But that was only at the start, and they soon make fast friends. Haruka wants nothing other than to impress her mother. Unfortunately, she disgraces herself during the chunin exams (That little piece of info was actually a spoiler to my fanfic, but heck, it probably won't be written anyway sweatdrop ) and loses to Hikari of the Sound Village by going absolutely crazy. I won't say why, but then again, she won't either. Despite that, Haruka really is someone you don't want to get on the wrong side of. Haruka also enjoys cleaning and working around the house, since her mother focussed on it so much. Temari says being lazy was a horrible thing, referring to Shikamaru. My fanfic is also ShikaTema, but sort of opposite from it too. sweatdrop
Oh wow, that was a lot. ^_^ Maybe I won't include the other characters. After all, this whole story is right in my head. There are....... 7 more OCs set in stone, including the huge storyline. sweatdrop Well alright, not a huge storyline.... but a good one no doubt. 3nodding
(I should seriously just write it all down. ninja )
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Posted: Mon Jan 01, 2007 8:45 pm
Hey those are cool. I wouldn't mind reading those stories.
I've been trying to write mine for ages, but I can't seem to get the first chapter out. Everytime I reread it, I end up scrapping it.
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Posted: Mon Jan 01, 2007 9:59 pm
Who is Haruka's father? Or is that a secret?
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Posted: Tue Jan 02, 2007 6:29 pm
Macroth Who is Haruka's father? Or is that a secret? Well, I haven't really gotten that far into Haruka's story, but her father is a guy from Konoha (that's how Temari moved into Konoha in the first place). After Haruka was born, the guy just left her. Ran away and left her with her child.... cry Oh, but of course, Gaara and Kankuro are hunting him down. blaugh (and Shikamaru too, secretly) This part leads into the ShikaTema, but this is a NaruHina guild, so we really shouldn't be talking about this. sweatdrop
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Posted: Tue Jan 02, 2007 6:32 pm
Macroth Hey those are cool. I wouldn't mind reading those stories. I've been trying to write mine for ages, but I can't seem to get the first chapter out. Everytime I reread it, I end up scrapping it. Yeah, I get that too! ^_^ Although, most of the time I like writing about what happens after the main character becomes a genin, so it's really hard for me to write about before that. (too boring. xd ) I gotta make a better begininng then. ^_^
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Posted: Tue Jan 02, 2007 7:18 pm
Let's make a pact. To finally get our respective fan fics started!
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Posted: Wed Jan 03, 2007 9:09 am
I've never made an OC for an anime. confused I guess that's really strange.
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Posted: Wed Jan 03, 2007 1:46 pm
Macroth Let's make a pact. To finally get our respective fan fics started! Yeah! ^_^ I'm in. But really, I'd rather draw the story than write it. Unfortunately, I'm not that great an artist yet. sweatdrop Oh well. Writing is fine too. 3nodding
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Posted: Wed Jan 03, 2007 2:30 pm
Heheh. I wish I could draw! There's so many things I would draw.
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Posted: Thu Jan 04, 2007 12:26 pm
Shotokittie I've never made an OC for an anime. confused I guess that's really strange. It's not that strange. blaugh My best friend wants to grow up to be a writer, but she's never written anything with an OC in it. 3nodding
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