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PostPosted: Mon Jan 01, 2007 3:05 pm


Feel free to comment!!!! biggrin

Charlie Pace sat silently on the beach and let the wind tossle his hair. He resisted the temptation to scratch the bug bite he recently discoverd on his arm.

Not far from him, Claire Littleton was standing before the vast ocean alone. She felt relieved everytime the chilled water reached her feet, she welcomed it warmly.

Charlie stood up suddenly and followed Claires footprints until he reached where she was and stood silently next to her.

Claire seemed to force a smile and look at Charlie out of the corner of her eye. She wanted to be alone at least for just a little while, Charlie always followed her.

"Whatcha doing Claire?" Charlie asked breaking the silence. He suddendly noticed how dirty his converse were when he looked down. They used to be pure white with the black square boxes perfectly aligned in a pattern. The purity of the white, was now splatterd with brown from the various trips he took in the jungle. Holes were beginning to appear out of no where. Everytime Charlie looked at them, he would discover another one.

Claire looked at Charlie and sighed. "Well i was alone, guess im not anymore." Claire said under her breath and looked back in the ocean and welcomed the wind that chilled her cheeks. "Oh well, maybe i can liven up the party a little more." Charlie said making jokes out of a peaceful moment. Claire hesitated to look back at Charlie. "Please Charlie. I just want to be alone." She said in a crisp Austrailian accent. Charlie looked away. "Right." He mumbled and began walking down the beach.

Not far away he saw a rushed Jack putting some belongings in the bag. Charlie struggled a bit to walk on the small sand hill but managed to get on the top. "Need some help Jack?" Charlie asked watching every move he made putting item by item in the bag.

Jack shook his head. "Charlie i think im good." He responded zipping up his bag. "May i ask where your going?" Charlie asked slightly surprised Jack didn't expand his own responce. "Hatch." Jack replied almost instantly and swung his bag around his sholder.

"Oh. I see." Charlie mumbled and without further adue Jack disappeard in the jungle. Charlie sighed in annoyance and continued down the beach.

Boone was gathering fire wood preparing for the cool nights they been having on the island. He put them neatly in a pile next to his tent. "Need help?" Charlie asked, Boone jumped causing him to drop the wood he once had in his arms. He turned around to reveal Charlie standing there. "You can grab the ones over there." Boone pointed to the left. Charlie nodded happily and picked them up and one by one put them on the neat pile Boone had started.

The last one Charlie stacked up caused the pile to tumble down. Charlie violently turned his head to Boone who didn't see the incident at least not yet. Charlie quickly tried to fix the pile before Boone could notice but it was a little too late.

Boone turned around and rolled his eyes.

Charlie looked at Boone and stopped fiddling with the pile of wood. "Sorry mate." Charlie said and sighed as Boone walked over to him. "Nah it's alright man." Boone said shoving the rest to the side.

"I'll just leave you be." Charlie decided and walked away.
PostPosted: Mon Jan 01, 2007 5:28 pm


Awww poor Charlie. I really liked this cuz this is exactly how he is on the show. You've really captured his character quite well! Applause! biggrin

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