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 Posted: Tue Jan 02, 2007 7:23 pm
Choke, choke, choke
she coughs and she sputters, and blood drips
down her chin and stains her teeth
she tries breathing in, only to cause more blood
to come,
gushing through nasal passages
and spilling out her nose, coating her
face in the rich rivers of crimson pain
Bleed, bleed, bleed
she shivers and she shakes, and closes her eyes
in a last effort to block the pain
the tremendous amount of physical,
and emotional,
pain
that only suffices to destroy her very being
threatening to cut her off
from her steady flow of life and beauty
Die, die, die
she feels her heart being ripped out of her chest
and knows that someone is there taking it
but she is too blind to see, and though she feels
a hand on her own, she
feels alone
her chest is torn open, and she lies on her back
and she is dead
but the hand, the betraying hand
holds the dead girl's heart
and the sad thing is, it's still
beating.
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Posted: Tue Feb 13, 2007 4:52 pm
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Posted: Sun Feb 25, 2007 11:29 am
It wasn't meant to be violent. The gore is an analogy to the despairing feeling of loss and loneliness.
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Posted: Sun Feb 25, 2007 6:29 pm
I love the poem. It has a lot of emotion channeled through it. I believe (correct me if I'm wrong) that the poem is about a girl who has had her heart broken. I felt like this when I had my heart broken recently. You are a very developed poet to be able to write such poetry.
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Posted: Sat Mar 03, 2007 12:40 pm
Why, thank you.
Yes. It's about a broken heart.
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Posted: Sat Mar 17, 2007 5:25 pm
mrgreen it gives me a mooey gooey feeling... <3 lol
I hope on day when I put my heart back together it will be there only for a moment before another rips it out lol rofl
happy green people day xd mrgreen
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