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 Posted: Fri Jan 05, 2007 6:34 am
tell me I'm an angelOk, well, post your poetry here. :3
I'm gonna post some of my poems, can someone comment on them?
And sowwy... I write A LOT.
xD
heart
Thanks.
take this to my grave
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Posted: Fri Jan 05, 2007 6:36 am
tell me I'm an angelThis is meant to be a song... I'm more of a song person.
Drowning In The Dark
Your eyes are beautiful,
Mysterious and dark.
And If my pencil wasn't dull,
I'd draw your portrait in the park
Hear the black birds sing
Hear the church bells ring...
Sing one last song for me before,
I break down and beg for more
Sell my dreams and bring me peace
Don't bring religion bring relief
For me because
I'm drowning in the dark
You're walking down and avenue
Mysterious and dark
This is the first time that I see you
Somewhere but the park
But I still hear the blackbirds sing
And hear the church bells ring
I don't need your help
I just need to breathe
(I can't breathe I can't see)
*long guitar solo*
You're walking down and avenue
Mysterious and dark
This is the first time that I see you
Somewhere but the park
But I still hear the blackbirds sing
And hear the church bells ring
Sing one last song for me before,
I break down and beg for more
Sell my dreams and bring me peace
Don't bring religion bring relief
For me because
I'm drowning in the dark
Because I'm drowning in the dark
(You have wonderful eyes and I love to look in them)
But I am drowning in the dark
(Because there's something about you that I don't see)
Don't want to but I'm drowning in the dark
(now I finally know now I finally see)
That I am drowning...
Drowning...
(you're death)
In the dark...
take this to my grave
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Posted: Fri Jan 05, 2007 6:37 am
tell me I'm an angelBurning Letters
Don't try to explain
While standing in the rain
Why you didn't call (didn't call)
Don't tell me how you care
Don't tell me how it's fair
That you didn't call (didn't call)
See the heavens cry
Even they ask why
I don't wan't your letters
I don't need your roses
And I think you got what you deserve
I don't read your empty words
And I'll burn all your letters
Let the ashes fall!
(let it burn)
Don't waste sheets of paper
Your lies are getting faker
Why even bother call? (don't call)
Don't tell me there was something
Because I owe you nothing
Why even bother call? (don't call)
See the heavens cry
Even they ask why
I don't wan't your letters
I don't need your roses
And I think you got what you deserve
I don't read your empty words
And I'll burn all your letters
Let the ashes fall!
(let it burn)
*long guitar solo*
I don't want to hear your voice
I'm leaving you without a choice
So
Burn the letters
Close your eyes and
Let the ashes fall!
I don't wan't your letters
I don't need your roses
And I think you got what you deserve
I don't read your empty words
And I'll burn all your letters
Let the ashes fall!
(let it burn)
Ooh, let it burn.
take this to my grave
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Posted: Fri Jan 05, 2007 6:39 am
tell me I'm an angelThis one is when I liked this guy... yeah... as you can see... xD
Going Down The Drain
Feelin kinda dead
Migraine in my head
Rollin off a hill
For the love of someone named Will
Something's wrong with me
My brain is twitching a response
To send for signals from beyond
It's almost killed my brain
Love for Will drove me insaine
What will happen of me?
I feel like crap and I look like s***
My hair is bad and my shoes don't fit
I'm going down the
d
r
a
i
n
My eyes are turning red
Lack of sleep, wanna be in bed
The way Will looks at me
Makes me wanna be
Nevermind I'm ******** dead
Oh
I feel like crap and I look like s***
My hair is bad and my shoes don't fit
I'm going down the
d
r
a
i
n
F*** it all my head is cracking and my skull is numb
My toes hurt real bad and I'm really dumb
F***
I want happiness
And it's going down the drain
take this to my grave
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Posted: Fri Jan 05, 2007 6:39 am
tell me I'm an angelAnd how can I go without a hate poem?
xD
Not your PROstiTUtE
I'm not so easy
I ain't gonna kiss your feet cuz you said you
loved me
Your excuse was cheezy
When I asked you for the first time what'd you
say to me
Shoulda just agreed
Before you made me bleed
I aint gonna be your prostitute
So
bye bye bye bye
I don't wanna talk to you
You gotta
fly fly fly fly
to show me that you love me too
till then
good bye bye bye bye
I don't wanna talk to you
Prove to me you love me to
Cause I don't believe in you
You can say please
But show me that you really
do care
I can't believe
Since I already saw you acting like
a player
What can I say
But day to day
I ain't gonna be your prostitute
So
bye bye bye bye
I don't wanna talk to you
You gotta
fly fly fly fly
to show me that you love me too
till then
good bye bye bye bye
I don't wanna talk to you
Prove to me you love me to
Cause I don't believe in you
take this to my grave
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Posted: Fri Jan 05, 2007 6:41 am
tell me I'm an angelOk, so I made this SN for aim like 'bleedxonxmexangel' so I decided to write a poem about it...
Bleed On Me Angel
Angel don't cry
It's all ok
And though you can't fly
The pain is far away
And I agree
It's always tough
The memory
Stays long enough
Just bleed on me angel
I know how you feel
Your heart is so fragile
The pain doesn't seem real
You have to share it with
Someone who's felt the filth
The horror of the cutting of the wings
(It will be alright)
Angel you'll be fine
It always hurts
Angel don't you cry
Although it burns
And I agree
It's always tough
The memory
Stays long enough
Just bleed on me angel
I know how you feel
Your heart is so fragile
The pain doesn't seem real
You have to share it with
Someone who's felt the filth
The horror of the cutting of the wings
(It will be alright)
Bleed on me angel and heal your wounds
Speak to me to heal your soul
Tell me that you feel alright
You'll be just fine
take this to my grave
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Posted: Fri Jan 05, 2007 6:42 am
tell me I'm an angelOk, ok, you guys are getting tired of my horrible poetry xD
I know.
Just two more. :3
This one's my FAVORITE.
Take Me Away
Do you like me
...the way that I like you?
Do you think of me
...when I'm thinking about you?
Do you want to know me
...the way I want to know you?
And do you love me
...like I love you
Oh a girl can dream
On a dark starry night
That she and her boy
Will jump and take flight
Oh I always will dream
That there'll be a day
When you'll come for me
And take me away
Take me far away, far away from here
Help me spread my wings, and fight my fears!
I won't be afraid, so take me away...
For at least one day...
...please take me away!
I'll lay on the roof
And I'll look at the sky
I'll think of the future,
And I'll let out a sigh
Well some day I'll be free
And I'll wait for the day
When you'll come for me
And take me away
Take me far away, far away from here
Help me spread my wings, and fight my fears!
I won't be afraid, so take me away...
For at least one day...
...please take me away!
take this to my grave
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Posted: Fri Jan 05, 2007 6:43 am
tell me I'm an angelOk, Ok, LAST one. Honest. :]
Written on Christmas eve... (duh) xD
It's Christmas Eve
Walked down the street
Soft winter lights
Was kind of cold
On Christ's eve night
Another feeling
The moon so grey
Does it feel sad like
I do every day?
It's Christmas eve
I should be happy
It's Christmas eve
I should be glad
It's Christmas eve
It should be jolly
It's Christmas day
And I feel sad
Oh baby Jesus
Did you feel pain?
Or do you agree that
No pain no gain?
Oh did you think that
On your birth day
People would feel sadder
Than every day?
It's Christmas eve
I should be happy
It's Christmas eve
I should be glad
It's Christmas eve
It should be jolly
It's Christmas day
And I feel sad
Christmas eve
Roll up my sleeves
And wash away the dirty snow
Christmas day
Sad once again
I think that everyone knows
That
It's Christmas eve
I should be happy
It's Christmas eve
I should be glad
It's Christmas eve
It should be jolly
It's Christmas day
And I feel sad
On Christmas day
This jolly day
And I
Feel
Sad
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Posted: Fri Jan 05, 2007 7:27 am
Those are good! I take it that the first two are more like song lyrics, seeing as most poetry doesn't have guitar. 3nodding I'll post some of my poetry here... Once I locate it... ^-^;
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Posted: Fri Jan 05, 2007 4:25 pm
Scary Godmother Those are good! I take it that the first two are more like song lyrics, seeing as most poetry doesn't have guitar. 3nodding I'll post some of my poetry here... Once I locate it... ^-^; Hehe, yeah xD
I forgot to take that out.
It's just that when I wrote them down, I had this distinct melody for them...
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Posted: Fri Jan 05, 2007 4:44 pm
It's all good. Lyrics are just poetry with music.
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Posted: Fri Jan 05, 2007 4:45 pm
And you've been stickied!
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Posted: Fri Jan 05, 2007 7:23 pm
Scary Godmother And you've been stickied! YAY!
*dances to music in ones head*
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Posted: Sun Jan 14, 2007 11:04 am
I liked them.
^^
They were really well written.
I could post some of mine.
I might.
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