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 Posted: Sun Jan 07, 2007 2:07 pm
This is about Luku(me) but includes kakashi alot. Its just the bigging so its crude. But I took out alot of stoof *coughsexcough* and other non PG things- just in case wink
sufggestions, comments and help needed, wanted, and welcomed ^^
A devious ninja who dresses in all white has been stealing from many people. Word spreads to Kahona and Team 7 (didnt see that comin huh?) is assigned to find the masked culprit known as The White Ninja and to take her to the nearest police station. Kakashi suggests that they pretend to be wealthy travelers who are completely defenseless…
“Naruto if we try to find him then hell run away.”-Kakashi
“But Kakashi-Sensei!”-Naruto
“Do you want to complete the mission or not Naruto?”- Sasuke
“…fine.” –Naruto
“Ok then. Everyone take off your forehead protectors and hide them along with any weapons. Good. Now let’s set up a camp- Sakura and Naruto- set up the tent, Sasuke- get some fire wood.”-Kakashi
The day goes by as the team relaxes and wonders if the ninja will ever show up. The sun sets and Sakura feels that the ninja is not coming.
“Kakashi-Sensei…its been along time, I think we should rest.”- Sakura
“He still might show up.” –Sasuke
Kakashi stops reading and nods- “That’s right- He’d probably attack at night.”
“Why don’t we just pretend to go to sleep…hehe…” –Naruto
“Naruto- that’s- that’s a really good idea!”- Sakura
“Hey really? Uh- I mean- I know! ... Yeah- it’s my idea!” –Naruto
“I thought you’d figure that out in a couple of days- but I guess I was wrong…Ok then let go to “sleep”.”-Kakashi
“What! You mean you knew that the whole time?!?” – Naruto
“You guys have to learn some things by yourself.” – Kakashi
The group leaves there bags just outside there tent. They wait sleepily…
“Gah- He isn’t coming!” –Naruto
“SHHH! *whispers* I think I heard something!” –Sakura
The group hears something in the trees and the soft ‘tap’ of feet landing outside their tent. As the feet grow closer to the tent the four ninja look at each other and nod.
*whispers* “Now!” –Kakashi
They leap out of the tent and try to grab the figure but he disappears.
They end up in battle. The White Ninja fights the group with unmatched speed, strength and stealth. After a long tiring battle they end up unsuccessful as The White Ninja escapes.
“HEY! COME BACK HERE YOU STUPID SCARDY-CAT!” –Naruto
“Its no use Naruto. We will get him another time-“ –Sasuke
“No! I cant believe that guy! Stealing from travelers- its not right! Why would anyone do that!” -Naruto
Naruto goes crazy over the fail and chases after The White Ninja. The White Ninja attacks him leaving a fatal wound.The White Ninja Watches Naruto fall down, then unexpectedly picks him up and takes him away with him.
“WHAT! Luku! You brought him here???” -?
“Look Mawatu- I’m sorry- I didn’t want to hurt him. I just felt so bad. - “Luku”
“How are we going to pay for that? Ahle needs medicine soon! She’s becoming very weak…” –“Mawatu.
Naruto gets up finding his whole body trembling with pain.
“Who are you…people?” –Naruto
“Your awake! Good- I thought I had killed you- I felt realy bad I’m so sorry I can explain-“ –“Luku”
“WHAT? YOU’RE THE WHITE NINJA????” – Naruto
“Huh? Oh yeah I guess so…But please don’t call me that- I’m Luku, and this is my brother Mawatu.” –Luku
“The White Ninja is a SHE?” – Naruto
“Yes.”
“….Well I know your helping me- but your in a lot of trouble!” –Naruto
“*sigh* I was in trouble before any of this started…” –Luku. Then Luku glances at a room where a pale, little girl lies.
“Huh?” –Luku
“My sister is very weakly- my brother has a job but it only pays enough for her medicine. So I-“ –Luku
“You stole things to help pay for everything else…right?” –Naruto
“Yes. I’m very sorry but…”
“Well! I’m Uzamaki Naruto! And I’m going to help you as soon as I get better!” – Naruto
“Luku...what did you do to this kid?” – Mawatu
“Huh?” –Naruto
“Its ok Naruto- my brother is a little...um, unwelcoming.”
“You should go back and rest Naruto, I’m sure your friends will want you back.” – Luku
“Yeah…” –Naruto
“And Naruto-“– Luku
“Huh?” –Naruto
“Thank you so much for understanding. I really wish I didn’t have to…”
Naruto smile and goes back into the bed room to rest. He falls unconscious and sleeps for two days. Meanwhile…
“The Damn Naruto- he must have run off last night to go chase after the ninja.” – Kakashi
“So does this mean we have to go find him?” – Sasuke
“Yup.” –Kakashi
“…” Sasuke
“Let’s go to the town nearby- we might find something there.”
Naruto awakes to find a little girl with a pale face and some strange colored blonde hair sitting n his bed staring at him.
“…” –girl
“Hello…?” –Naruto
“Hello- you’re the sick boy huh? Luku said make sure your ok.” -girl
“You’re the little girl-“ – Naruto
“I am NOT a little girl- I’m 7 years old!”
“Oh. Uh. I’m sorry. I’m Naruto.”
“I am Ahle.”
“Ahle? Who are you talking to?” – Luku
“Naruto.” – Ahle
Luku comes in happy to see that Naruto is awake.
“Ah so you finally decided to wake up Naruto?”
“Yeah…I feel much better now.”
“Good. Ive made lunch- you must be hungry- Ahle- why don’t you take Naruto outside in the front by the table.”
“Yay! Come on Naruto!” –Ahle
Ahle takes Naruto outside then after chatting with him goes inside to rest. Naruto enjoys the warmth of the sun looking at the small village he is in. Then he notices Kakashi, Sakura and Sasuke.
“Hey! You guys! Over here!” –Naruto
“Naruto? What are you doing? We’ve been looking for you everywhere!” –Sakura.
Luku doesn’t see them and comes outside with Naruto's lunch. Sasuke instantly reacts and attacks Luku who becomes stunned. Naruto tries to explain Luku’s reasons for stealing.
“Even if it is true Naruto we have a mission and we have to complete it. What she did was wrong. We have to take her to the police station.” -Kakashi
They take her to the local police and the police chief- Buta -who is a drunk fat old man doesn’t believe that Luku is The White Ninja.
“Weeellls- itish arl veree simple. That shtupid ninja guy is a guy. And Luku ish a girl. See! If you cant tesh you ares all dumb and shupid!” – Buta
“What are you talking about? How do you knw hif the White Ninja was a boy or a girl?” –Sakura
“Weeeeeeeeeeell- see look! Luku has boobs! No boy has those get it?” –Bota
“…” –Luku
“…” –everyone else
“Um…I am going home now and I suggest that Naruto stays for a day more- to be sure he’s alright.” –Luku
The group decides to stay the night. In the middle of the night Kakashi wakes up. He wonders around the house .But stops when he sees Luku.
“This is a nice house- who did you steal it from?” –Kakashi
“Thank you. And I didn’t ‘steal’ it. Me and my brother made it.” – Luku
“…” Kakashi
“Just because I stole food from travelers doesn’t mean that I’m a bad person. You can understand that- Hatake Kakashi.”
“You know my name?” –Kakashi
“ I know more than your name…”
“Interesting.”
“…*smirk *” –Luku
“How?” –Kakashi
“My father…*frowns*” –Luku
“What do you mean?”
“It doesn’t matter anymore…he is dead.”
“Someone killed him?”
“*Luku looks up at Kakashi* I killed him.”
“Why?”
“So he would stop hurting me…stop hurting us…”
“…” – Kakashi
There is a scream and many angry shouts- the village is attacked by bandits. Luku, Kakashi, Naruto, Sasuke, and Sakura are abouble to kill most of them the ones that escape take all the towns medicine! So in order to get medicine for Ahle Luku discovers that the only other supply is in... Kahona! (OMFG no way!) Luku, Mawatu, and Ahle set out and go to Kohona shortly after Team 7 leaves. They settle down. Luku becomes a Kohona ninja and works as an ANBU assassin. Luku is faced with a difficult assassination and on her way there meets Team 7. The people are stunned to come face to face with each other again. Luku explains that her family has moved and she is now an official Kahona ninja. Then something amazing happens- Team 7's mission and Luku's assassination job collide! The mission of T7 is somehow connected with Luku's assassination job! (you can see i haven’t filled in some things ^^ wink Luku tags along with T7. Luku and Kakashi finding themselves in love. They complete the mission (somehow...don’t know that part yet) on the way back some strange ninja attack the group- and it is clear they mean to kill Luku. Luku identifies them as her father secret group of ninja- the Gaidoku Ninja- or poison ninja- who use weapons tainted with a fatal poison- one touch small cut with the weapon and you die.
“What?!”-Sasuke
“I don’t see how its possible that they are around but…” – Luku
“I thought you killed your father?” – Kakashi
“WHAT?” –Naruto, Sasuke, Sakura
“Well, yeah- I thought I did…” – Luku
“…” – Kakashi
“Ok. Well. Lets set up camp here we will have a guard up at all time. Sasuke- you go first.” – Kakashi
“Alright.” – Sasuke
Sasuke is up for a while when Luku comes up to him.
“Sasuke you can sleep now- I will be guard ok?” – Luku
“Ok.”
The Gaidoku Ninja attack Luku. Luku not wanting any of the T7 to get hurt runs away while fighting the Gaidoku Ninja. Team 7 tries to chase after her. They find her cornered, but still uncut by the deadly weapons- the team fights the Gaidoku Ninja until all but one remains. He swings at Sakura but Luku blocks it with her left arm! (sakura what have you done!!!) Naruto and Sakura helped Luku up-
"Luku! Are you ok?"-Naruto
"I’m fine- as I could be hehehe..."-Luku
Luku nudged the two away clutching her arm in pain. She stared at the floor, trying to hide her emotions (btw to explain how Kakashi knows wtf she is thinking it is because at this point he has taken out his sharigun-i think thats how you spell it...) All of them knew Luku's fate- and couldn’t think of anything to say. breaking the silence Kakashi spoke-
"Naruto, Sakura, Sasuke- your all hurt go to the Inn in the village-" -Kakashi
"But Kakashi-sen-"-Naruto
"Go."-Kakashi.
Luku looked up briefly meeting Kakashi's eyes but when he found Sakura and Sasuke staring at her(Naruto is too dumb to notice >>) she looked back down.
"Kakashi is right- go" –Luku
Luku watched the three walk away, sadly. When they were gone
Kakashi slowly walked over to her
“Kakashi- I… I am… I’m going to-“
Luku then felt pain jolting her arm- she cursed and collapsed into Kakashi’s arms.
They didn’t speak for a long time. The just stood there together- and Luku could only think of one thing:
“I’m going to die- but I love him…”
Luku grabbed Kakashi’s mask, pulled it down and kissed him.
(Ill stop there so nothing ‘else’ happens ;3)
more later
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Posted: Sun Jan 07, 2007 2:24 pm
rofl "luku has boobs and guys don't" what an idiot! rofl this is good. nice job. domokun *continues reading*
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Posted: Sun Jan 07, 2007 2:34 pm
RaikutaGrimm rofl "luku has boobs and guys don't" what an idiot! rofl this is good. nice job. domokun *continues reading* Fear my strange humor attempts >8D and thank you ^^
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Posted: Sun Jan 07, 2007 2:54 pm
Luku Hatake RaikutaGrimm rofl "luku has boobs and guys don't" what an idiot! rofl this is good. nice job. domokun *continues reading* Fear my strange humor attempts >8D and thank you ^^ oh, and could you fill in the rest of the stuff? 'cause this is really interesting to me. 3nodding even if you did kiss kakashi... stare ...lol, nah, it's cool...so just some more detail and fill in the blanks, kay? domokun
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Posted: Sun Jan 07, 2007 3:28 pm
RaikutaGrimm Luku Hatake RaikutaGrimm rofl "luku has boobs and guys don't" what an idiot! rofl this is good. nice job. domokun *continues reading* Fear my strange humor attempts >8D and thank you ^^ oh, and could you fill in the rest of the stuff? 'cause this is really interesting to me. 3nodding even if you did kiss kakashi... stare ...lol, nah, it's cool...so just some more detail and fill in the blanks, kay? domokun xD lol- wow- i didnt realize anyone would like it that much! xD and by blanks do you mean- after i kiss him? Or just all the little detaily thingies? *cracks up laughing* youve made my day 83 *glomps*
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Posted: Tue Jan 09, 2007 6:35 pm
Luku Hatake RaikutaGrimm Luku Hatake RaikutaGrimm rofl "luku has boobs and guys don't" what an idiot! rofl this is good. nice job. domokun *continues reading* Fear my strange humor attempts >8D and thank you ^^ oh, and could you fill in the rest of the stuff? 'cause this is really interesting to me. 3nodding even if you did kiss kakashi... stare ...lol, nah, it's cool...so just some more detail and fill in the blanks, kay? domokun xD lol- wow- i didnt realize anyone would like it that much! xD and by blanks do you mean- after i kiss him? Or just all the little detaily thingies? *cracks up laughing* youve made my day 83 *glomps* heheh, that seems to happen a lot... sweatdrop Luku Hatake There is a scream and many angry shouts- the village is attacked by bandits. Luku, Kakashi, Naruto, Sasuke, and Sakura are abouble to kill most of them the ones that escape take all the towns medicine! So in order to get medicine for Ahle Luku discovers that the only other supply is in... Kahona! (OMFG no way!) Luku, Mawatu, and Ahle set out and go to Kohona shortly after Team 7 leaves. They settle down. Luku becomes a Kohona ninja and works as an ANBU assassin. Luku is faced with a difficult assassination and on her way there meets Team 7. The people are stunned to come face to face with each other again. Luku explains that her family has moved and she is now an official Kahona ninja. Then something amazing happens- Team 7's mission and Luku's assassination job collide! The mission of T7 is somehow connected with Luku's assassination job! (you can see i haven’t filled in some things ^^ wink Luku tags along with T7. Luku and Kakashi finding themselves in love. They complete the mission (somehow...don’t know that part yet) on the way back some strange ninja attack the group- and it is clear they mean to kill Luku. Luku identifies them as her father secret group of ninja- the Gaidoku Ninja- or poison ninja- who use weapons tainted with a fatal poison- one touch small cut with the weapon and you die. this part, maybe just fill in the blanks during your spare time or whatever. xd
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Posted: Wed Jan 10, 2007 5:11 pm
lol- ok
im wiating to think of something good x3
im just touching up the next bit so what happens next is comming soon 8D
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Posted: Thu Jan 11, 2007 11:44 pm
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Posted: Fri Jan 19, 2007 9:20 pm
lol, kissy kakashi. domokun is funny, for some reason. X3
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Posted: Sun Jan 21, 2007 7:31 pm
version yet RaikutaGrimm lol, kissy kakashi. domokun is funny, for some reason. X3 kissing? lol- at least i didnt put the whole on here xD
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Posted: Tue Jan 23, 2007 11:46 pm
eek please...don't... sweatdrop
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Posted: Wed Feb 07, 2007 3:06 pm
Ahg! dont kill me! i know i havent uploaded anything much...........
sory!
lots of tests and studying *cough*
il be able to finish the next part soon- i swear!
and BTW ive already figuered out how my story will end.
and no im not telling you! hehehe
After im done with this one do you guys think i should upload the next one?
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Posted: Fri Feb 09, 2007 12:09 am
1. chill dudette, no one's hatin' on anyone. biggrin
2. That sounds awesome
3. H3|| yeah! but, no pressure. sweatdrop
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Posted: Fri Feb 09, 2007 11:39 pm
It was late and Naruto, Sakura, and Sasuke were waiting at the Amari-Roppou Inn main lodge.
"uuuuuh! I am sick of waiting!" Naruto siad impatiently throughing his hands in the air.
"...*sigh* it has been a while but..." Sakura trailed off...she couldnt understand what was going on!
"What if something happened- like more badguys came? They could be introuble!" Naruto looked up angrily- he wanted to do something insted of just sitting around.
"Introuble?" "Luku's already going to die stupid."
Naruto angrily glanced at sasuke.
"Well then what the hell is happening out there?!?" he shouted.
"Kakashi problebly wanted to end her suffering or something...just kill her before the poison started to realy get to her...he just didnt want you to get in the way and try and stop him from-"
"SHUT UP SASUKE!" Naruto jumped up and stomped over to where Sasuke was sitting.
"Kakashi-sensi would NEVER do that! He would-"
"I would never do what Naruto?" Kakashi had appeared at the doorway without the three noticing over his sholder was Luku pale and limp.
The three looked up.
"Um..er...nothing kakashi-sensi." Naruto stared at Luku. She was dead...Sasuke...he couldnt have been right...could he?
"Ummm...well- you should all get some rest we have to head back tommorrow you know." Kakashi then walked over to the checking-in stand and talked quietly to Kuri the Inn owner. Kuri nodded responded and woddled to a door and poened it. Kakashi walked inside then seconds later reapeared without Luku or Kuri.
He looked at the floor for a moment then looked up.
"Well? Off to bed."
The next morning they discovered that Luku was not dead but in a deep coma. They lefted Luku in the care and of Kuri went back to kohona.
They conttinued with their missions and on rare occasions kakashi disappeared for a few days- his wereabouts unknown. One evening on his return Sakura confronts Kakashi about his disapearances.
"Well. I suppose thats a fair enough question- even if it is non of your buissness...remeber Luku?"
Sakura nodded...how long had it been? about 7 months?
"Obviously the innkeeper-kuri- has needed pay for taking care of her so i take my trips down to Hanro(note:town were team 7 met luku...also were luku lives.) to pay for her care- obviously her brother and sister cant pay for it...so i do."
"Is Luku ok? Is she out of the coma yet?" Naruto asked over-hearing the conversation.
Kakashi smiled at him. "Yes shes fine...she woke up a few weeeks ago before I arrived, but, she was still weak and suddenly went back into the coma." Kakashi turned to go into their tent but naruto jumped infront of kakashi.
"hey! kakashi-sensi! lets go visit her sometime yeah? I wana see her! hehehe! comon let us go with you next time yeah?"
Kakashi who was suprised jumped back a little.
"I dont know...it itterupts with your training-"
"please kakashi-sensi! please!!!?"
:I agree with naruto- i want to go too." sakura added.
"......." sasuke rolled his eyes at the two.
"*sighs* well.alright. But i must warn you its sort of boring you know."
"so what? well get to see luku!" naruto said enthusiasticly.
"NOW LETS GOOOO!" naruto jumped into the air raising his fist high above his head.
"Um...naruto...im not going for a month."
"HAHAHA!- what? aaaaaww."
" we need to finish our mission any ways." Sasuke said.
They nodded. Naruto, sakura, and even sasuke thought about it...a month...just a month. They all wanted to know who the people who attacked them were...and the wanted to know what the hell was up with luku and kakashi.
DUNDUNDUN. id stop here but i havnt writen much soooo. its been a month. in that time orochimaru has tried to get sasuke to go...erm bad...i guess but sasuke hasnt had his little face-off with naruto yet wink
A month past. Naruto was very exited- so was Sakura. And sasuke was too...though hed never admit that! Kakashi was at his usual spot...Obito's grave. He sighed. They would go with him and...well...the would find out know wouldnt they?
"What else can i do Obito?" the wispered. Then he grabbed his bag and headed off to the ramen stand(forgot what that place is called..something ramen...er...) were the team had agreed to meet up.
"Kakashi-sensi! your late...as usual!" Sakura stomped her foot as kakashi walked slowly twoard the waiting group.
"....uummm..." kakashi mummbled reading the lastist addition of 'Come, Come Paridise!"
"FINIALY! WERE GOING TO GO!" naruto smiled- he wanted to get there ASAP!
The team set off. It took two weeks to reach Hanro. (hey! its far away!) They get to the Inn early in the morning. Kuri greeted them-
"Well Mr.Hatake! This time you brough your friends! how wonderful! Ive missed the bright, shinning faces you know! M Naruto-chan, Saukra-chan, Sasuke-chan! My my! youve all grown! well- good thing Luku's awake- im so happy she is! And youll be happy too- shes very healthy now, and shes been wondering about all of you! But dont mind her my dears- her memory is a bit fuzzled- to her it seems like it all happened yesterday! Ah well! Let me just see if shes dressed and all that fuss- yes- one moment- yes...." Kuri scuffled into the same room that Luku was first taken- they heard a sleepy voice say something....then a yawn... then Kuri laughed and said something along the lines of
"well! yes yes! i would be a bit suprised to my dear!"
Then Kuri bussled happily out of the room."
Yes my dears! she realy wants to see you all! yes! Oh now! mY my! go right in...yes yes..watch your step sasuke...there ah...yes sakura...umhum..yes...not a big doorway i assure you..yes...ah..after you Mr.Hatake (hehehe thats still sounds funny to me)."
The walked and saw Luku. She looked like nothing had ever happened...execpt one itsy-bitsy detail......
".................." Sasuke, Sakura, and Naruto
"*nose-bleed*"
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Posted: Sat Feb 10, 2007 11:10 am
first person to guess correctly what is going on gets a suprise and a free hug!
this part was sorta of quick i know i know TT
but i have school so....im gonna get to the touch-ups during the summer.
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