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 Posted: Thu Oct 28, 2004 6:46 am
Forever
to the one i loved...
I will love you forever,
I will forget you never.
You are my best friend
And I`ll love till the end.
No one is like me,
No one is like thee,
But we are the same,
You just have a different name…
We are both insane,
But we are as well so sane.
You are nicer,
And I`m wiser…
When I smile, when I cry,
You are always near by.
How come I can love you?
And think of you whatever I do?
How come you are always so kind?
And always bear me in mind?
You said you would love me forever,
And would leave me never.
And I believe you, my love!
And I promise I`ll never without you rove!
You are THE one!
And I`ll never be lone!
You are my best friend,
And we will be together till the end!
And after death,
We will walk together on the path,
And will be together forever,
And will separate from each other never!
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Posted: Thu Oct 28, 2004 7:15 am
Sorry, I can't do poetry reviews.
I know this can't be changed without rewriting the poem - so just for future reference: I don't know that your rhyming scheme works. Generally I've found consecutive rhyming lines not to be effective, but that might just be me, so wait to see what others say.
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Posted: Sat Oct 30, 2004 8:53 am
they will say the same... >< XDD my English poems sux! XDD i am waaaaaaaay much better in Bulgarian XDD i just posted it `cause i wanted to... XDD
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Posted: Sat Oct 30, 2004 3:03 pm
JoeLee they will say the same... >< XDD my English poems sux! XDD i am waaaaaaaay much better in Bulgarian XDD i just posted it `cause i wanted to... XDD
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Posted: Sun Oct 31, 2004 5:44 am
Queeny JoeLee they will say the same... >< XDD my English poems sux! XDD i am waaaaaaaay much better in Bulgarian XDD i just posted it `cause i wanted to... XDD thanks...
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