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Zen FallPaw
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PostPosted: Mon Jan 08, 2007 6:50 pm


Gaia Username: Morphball
Character name: Demyx
Age: ...maybe eighteen?
Sex: Male
Location:The World that Never Was. After that he goes wherever he's sent, mostly places he'd really rather NOT visit.
Affiliation: Not really a bad guy, or if he is, he's just bad at being bad. Demyx would rather be off relaxing, slacking off, making music...or slacking off. He's not all gung-ho about the Org.'s crusade to get their hearts back, but he admits it's tough to write good music without a heart, and that's a shame.
Physical Description: You know the mullet. The blonde mullet. The black coat, boots and gloves. He's rather scrawny, and must be wearing layers under his coat (or maybe it's just a thick coat).
Weapon? A blue, stylish sitar.
Shield, Staff or Sword? Staff
Who are you? The Who? MAN, I LOVE THE WHO.
Sample. Bony hands shot up, curling into sharply-angled fists. They turned inwards, outwards, rotated as his arms slowly lowered from an upright zero to an outstretched one-hundred eighty degrees. His mouth opened, his jaw creaked open and moved to the right as a tormented groan scratched through his throat.

He fell back, bonelessly, dangling and swinging slowly back and forth. A light breeze blew his hair about, like the soft hands of a lover running over his scalp. Vainly, one hand checked to assure him said mass of gravity-defying blonde remained intact. His eyes opened to a blue sky, and a green canopy disrupting the bright sunlight. Nonetheless, his hand touched his chest, found the sunglasses hooked in the neck of his voluminous robes, extracted them. With a flick of the wrist the shades were open, simple, stunning, dark. That was the way they operated. If he had thought it allowable, he would have sprung on a lighter, trendier pair, rock star shades.

He felt like Johnny Cash in these cheap black shades, but maybe that wasn't such a bad thing. Marluxia wanted him to water the garden, but...forget that! It was such a nice day, clear air, bright sun. What else did those stupid flowers need? If anything needed watering, it was him...

The others might have laughed, though it was hard to imagine that mirthful feeling, he hadn't really laughed in, well, it felt like forever to him. Ever since they'd started him on this stupid training regimen, the force of his water summonings had increased from the equivalent of a faucet or a garden hose to torrents, eruptions of blue wrath. Waterspouts. He could summon waterspouts now. Crush his enemies.

But he couldn't pour himself a damned glass of water! it was like they had been working these last few months to flip a little switch in him, from 'squirt' to 'blast', like something you'd expect to see on one of those fancy hose attachments. He wished he could go back, but the others were preparing for something. The low numbers. What were they planning? What was all this work for? They would tell him eventually. He doubted he would appreciate the 'scope' of it, as Xigbar was fond of saying, him and his stupid gun puns, but he wasn't a hippie hick. Maybe a little hippie, but more rock n' roll, he liked to think. Sure, he was a free spirit, but he could kick some serious a** now. Kick some a**, but he still couldn't pour himself a simple glass of water.

Sighing, he laced his fingers behind his neck, long, tough musician's fingers, sinking them into the thick, long hair lying against it, and closed his eyes. Let Marluxia water his own stupid plants, Demyx wasn't goin' anywhere.

Grudgingly, he admitted that he would probably just crush them accidentally anyway. The switch had been flicked, and he hadn't figured out how to set it back yet. Or even if he could set it back.
PostPosted: Tue Jan 09, 2007 1:56 pm


I like.

Thumbs up!!

Shade of Polkana


MagickFaerieDust

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PostPosted: Tue Jan 09, 2007 4:05 pm


Nice.

I like the humor in the profile. (ie. "the mullet," "The Who? MAN, I LOVE THE WHO.")

Also, I like how you wrote your sample. The words you used made me feel like I was there. Descriptive is good.

All in all, I vote yes.
PostPosted: Tue Jan 09, 2007 5:27 pm


... This app rocks my socks. XDDD Very funny, very Demyx. Definite yes!

Desdemona Winchcombe
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Zen FallPaw
Crew

PostPosted: Wed Jan 10, 2007 9:18 pm


I quite like the way that the personality was brought out in a way other than interaction, which I haven't seen much of before. Great use of description to really throw the reader into the scene, too!

I definitely vote Yes!
PostPosted: Sat Jan 13, 2007 11:52 am


*quivers with excitement*
...

YES! I VOTE YES! FREAKIN YES!~

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PostPosted: Wed Jan 17, 2007 9:23 am


I found the sample you supplied very descriptive, and in essense, quite satisfying. You seem to me a very prospective rper, one of the better I have seen on gaia thus far. Number three approves of this one recieving Demyx.

In other words: Yes.
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