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 Posted: Fri Jan 12, 2007 12:43 pm
Hey all! ^-^ I'll be trying to get a fiction up really soon and when I do I want loads of comments on it. 3nodding But be constructive, cause I can't improve myself if I don't get constructive critisim. *nods* Being yelled at does improve anything, telling me something I could change to do better, does. 3nodding
I look forward to your comments on any and all works I put up. Love ya all. heart ^-^
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Posted: Fri Jan 19, 2007 6:49 pm
YOUR DAM RIGHT! GETTING YELLED AT IS PAINFUL. I can't wait to read a good portion of your story and don't worry, I am most gentle with comments.
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Posted: Thu Jan 25, 2007 4:47 pm
I really love the premise for The Stalker. I for one have been known in my time to like the villain in some stories more than the villain. I can see the heroic deeds of some of the most infamous people through history. Everyone does see things differently, and sometimes I can just connect better with someone who is flawed.
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Posted: Sat Jan 27, 2007 5:17 pm
It is good for every character to have atleast one flaw. it just makes them seem more real. Those who share the same flaws as the character can easily (forgot the word -_-) with it... By the way, i like what im reading so far. And don't worry, it will hit me sooner or later.
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Posted: Sun Jan 28, 2007 11:12 am
Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
^^ I have to go back to Corriganville now.
Of course I've never climbed Ape Mountain, but I'm pretty sure Ken and Cassie have.
Also, nice work on The Forest of Secrets, since it seems to have changed since you wrote it the first time.
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Posted: Wed Jan 31, 2007 8:40 pm
Hmm... I really like it all. In fact, I can't wait for the next installments. One thing, however... Be sure to go into chapter one of 'The Forest of Secrets' and respell 'possess'. ^.^
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Posted: Wed Jan 31, 2007 10:41 pm
Nutter05 It is good for every character to have atleast one flaw. it just makes them seem more real. Those who share the same flaws as the character can easily (forgot the word -_-) with it... By the way, i like what im reading so far. And don't worry, it will hit me sooner or later.
*Laughs* And I hope it does.
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Posted: Wed Jan 31, 2007 10:45 pm
LittleBlackWolf LittleBlackWolf I really love the premise for The Stalker. I for one have been known in my time to like the villain in some stories more than the villain. I can see the heroic deeds of some of the most infamous people through history. Everyone does see things differently, and sometimes I can just connect better with someone who is flawed.
^^ I have to go back to Corriganville now.
Of course I've never climbed Ape Mountain, but I'm pretty sure Ken and Cassie have.
Also, nice work on The Forest of Secrets, since it seems to have changed since you wrote it the first time.
*Laughs* If you go there, I go with you. I haven't been there in a while. ninja And for story purposes it might be good to walk around there again....also...I want to climb into the creek again! biggrin ...that is if it's not too watery down there again.
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Attic_Flowers Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Jan 31, 2007 10:50 pm
Alicornia Hmm... I really like it all. In fact, I can't wait for the next installments. One thing, however... Be sure to go into chapter one of 'The Forest of Secrets' and respell 'possess'. ^.^
^-^;;; Heh. Thanks for letting me know. Usually it's Amanda(LittleBlackWolf) who realizes I spelled something wrong or used the wrong word. *nods*
^-^ And thankies. I'll try to get the next installments up soon. I just have to finish making my characters for my new rp and get it started, then I'll work on the next parts to these stories more. *nods*
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Posted: Sun Jan 31, 2010 6:43 pm
I have a laptop now...and it's a reliable computer....so I'll actually be up-dating my stories now....I need to write in them, it's practice for the other stories I'm writing to actually publish.
I'm starting a new story...I hope you all well like it...and read my other stories too...Sorry it's been so long.
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