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Archangel Calyphrael Crew
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 Posted: Thu Oct 28, 2004 10:10 pm
Post your haikus here. Haiku is an ancient Japanese form of poetry -- the standard form for a haiku is three lines; five syllables, seven syllables, five syllables.
I think. I may have it backwards.
Anyways, have at!
I'll start:
Many people here,
Chatting away happily,
But not all are smart.
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Posted: Fri Oct 29, 2004 12:28 pm
Yep, it's 5-7-5
Kono haiku ni
kisetsugo ga nai
dame da dame
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Archangel Calyphrael Crew
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Posted: Fri Oct 29, 2004 12:38 pm
I don't understand,
But this is not something new.
English, pretty please?
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Posted: Fri Oct 29, 2004 1:34 pm
It is Japanese
The language of the haiku
And yet, I'll translate:
In this haiku
There is no seasonal word
That is bad. Bad.
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Posted: Fri Oct 29, 2004 5:31 pm
I wish I were poetically talented. gonk
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Posted: Fri Oct 29, 2004 9:07 pm
Yes, [The Perfect Drug],
I wish you were too -- alas,
Poetry is.. hard..
[Your name is perfect for my haiku XD]
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Archangel Calyphrael Crew
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Posted: Sun Oct 31, 2004 10:05 pm
[The Perfect Drug] I wish I were poetically talented. gonk That is the best part About writing just haikus Talent's unneeded. Although it does help If your vocabuary Is quite extensive
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Posted: Mon Nov 01, 2004 12:15 pm
Embyr Arrikanez Yes, [The Perfect Drug], I wish you were too -- alas, Poetry is.. hard.. [Your name is perfect for my haiku XD]
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