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Posted: Wed Jan 17, 2007 1:04 pm
I just pulled this together a few minutes ago... it took me about uh.. 15 min to 1/2 an hour. Tell me if you like it. It's called "No Change" and I'm trying to write the music for it now.
Verse 1: THE SADNESS IN HER EYES, WASN'T JUST ANOTHER LULLIBY
SHE COULDN’T HOLD IT BACK, NO JOKE.
SHE JUST COULDN'T GET THE WORDS RIGHT. AND HE CHOKED.
HE SAID THAT SHE JUST ACTED LIKE ANOTHER PERSON. Chorus: THERE JUST WASN’T ANY CHANGE IN THE WAY SHE LOOKED AT IT. SHE COULDN’T FIND THE WAY TO FACE ALL OF HER FEARS.
Verse 2: SHE JUST COULDN’T GET THE FACTS STRAIGHT----- SHE FOUND THAT IT WASN’T NEW.
WHAT HE SAID WAS ACTUALLY TRUE. WHAT HE SAID WAS ACTUALLY TRUE.
Chorus: THERE JUST WASN’T ANY CHANGE IN THE WAY SHE LOOKED AT IT. SHE COULDN’T FIND THE WAY TO FACE ALL OF HER FEARS.
Verse 3: SHE JUST COULDN’T GET THE CHANGE, THAT SHE WAS LOOKING FOR IN ALL OF IT.
THE ONLY WAY SHE COULD, WOULD BE TO THROW IT ALL AWAY.-----
Chorus: THERE JUST WASN’T ANY CHANGE IN THE WAY SHE LOOKED AT IT. SHE COULDN’T FIND THE WAY TO FACE ALL OF HER FEARS.
SHE GAVE IT TO GOD. GAVE HIM ALL OF HER FEARS.
GAVE HIM ALL OF HER TEARS.----
Chorus: THERE JUST WASN’T ANY CHANGE IN THE WAY SHE LOOKED AT IT. SHE COULDN’T FIND THE WAY TO FACE ALL OF HER FEARS. UNTIL GOD TOOK THE STING AWAY-- FROM HER EYES--
Closing: THERE JUST WASN’T ANY CHANGE. THERE JUST WASN’T ANY CHANGE. THERE JUST WASN’T ANY CHANGE. THERE JUST WASN’’T ANY---- CHANGE.----
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Posted: Fri Jul 13, 2007 12:03 pm
very good start! needs more substance though. keep it up! smile
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Posted: Fri May 14, 2010 4:11 pm
I love it honestly. Can you check out mine?? It's under My Song in the Songwriters thread. Plz question It's a work in progress.
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Posted: Wed Jun 09, 2010 1:56 pm
wats it goin 2 b played on ?
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Posted: Sun Sep 12, 2010 3:54 am
The idea of it is really good but I reckon you should add I don't dont' know like more to it...
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