Welcome to Gaia! ::

My dreams
shattered.
My hopes
dulled.
My light
extinguished.
My love
relinquished.

I feel so alone.
So abandoned,
So unwanted.

I lie here in the green, swaying grass,
and stare at the forever changing clouds,
drifting in the bright blue sky.
Wondering why I'm so alone.

Time flies as life goes on.
The sun rises,
the sun sets.
Day bleeds into night;
night trickles into day.

Now I lie here in the cold white snow,
and stare into the midnight sky.
counting the innumerous diamond stars,
wondering why you're not here.

But
My wings
broken.
My words
muted.
My heart
scarred.
My love
unwanted.

And whatever I was before,
means nothing to you now.

I am alone.

I think your style was atune and the words went well to make a scheme in themselves and the poem (being the idea) was great! 3nodding