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 Posted: Fri Jan 19, 2007 7:05 pm
All your lies I'm not believing.
I've started a story called Moonlight Walkers in a new notebook I got and I want to type it as well as write it.
Do feel free to comment on the parts that I put. ^-^
I need constructive critisizim (SP? @-@).
And don't steal my stuff! Not like you'd want to but if someone does, and you see them, tell me, please!! I treasure my written work whether you guys like it or not!
My hands are at your throat and I think I hate you.
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Posted: Fri Jan 19, 2007 7:36 pm
All your lies I'm not believing.
Here are the main characters. I will probably be adding more, considering I just started on this project.
And, yes, I admit it. I sort of stole some of the character information ideas from the character hut thread.
sweatdrop Don't kill me, please.
Be glad I have these, you're lucky. If this was to ever get published (Pssh, yeah right) then the people wouldn't see them. These're just good reference for me.
Full name: Kenji Rakesh Nocrune
Nickname: Kenji Hitame (Adopted last name)
Age: 15
Zodiac: Scorpio
Sex: Male
Breed: Lunar
Hair: Kenji's hair is pure black. It's about chin-length and always messy. He keeps a red bandna around his forehad.
Eyes: Kenji's eyes are a light-ish type of red. They seem to have a glint of grey/silver in them, too.
Allignment: Good (But he doesn't know it at first.)
Role: Adopted teen that has powers and is the price of the Moon and main character.
Weapons: Powers and a pocket knife he keeps at all times (Lame, yes. Leave me alone.)
Clothing: Kenji is always wearing some form of red or black shirt. He always either wears blue jeans or black cargo-ish pants. He wears black low-top converse. He always wears a red hoody and has never been seen without it. He wears no jewelry.
Place of Origin: The Moon, but he doesn't know it.
Pet: A small black cat named Shadow that follows him constantly when he's at home.
Theme song: Headstrong by Trapt
Hobbies: Kenji likes to read and write. He also likes to listen to music and play with Shadow.
Likes: His hobbies and animals.
Dislikes: Basically everything.
Fighting style: Kenji likes using weapons but if he can't he's good with hand-to-hand combat (Fist fight!)
Magic/powers: Kenji can control darkness and the moon phases and things but he doesn't know it yet, and his powers haven't developed fully yet.
Random stuff: His first name means 'strong second son' in Japanese. His middle names means 'lord fo the full moon' in Indian.
Personality: Kenji is mono-tone and anti-social. He is quiet and hates people. He isn't talked to and it's fine with him.
Bio: Kenji had never known his blood parents. He was brought to Earth by accident as a baby and he'd grown up as a human, his powers remaining dormant. He was then a sophmore in highschool and was almost never talked to. He hates people so that's fine with him, but then the balance and peace of his world was disrupted, by her.
Full name: Luna Trintune Ayama
Surname/Nickname: Luna or Lune
Age: 14
Zodiac sign: Pisces
Sex: Female
Breed: Lunar
Hair: Luna's hair is long, going down to her butt. She keeps it really clean and sometimes braids it. It's dark. It's black but some people say it's got a blue tint in it.
Eyes: Luna's eyes are purple and large. She has a touch of blue in them.
Allignment: Good
Role: Guardian for Kenji.
Weapon(s): Luna uses her magic and her star bow and arrows.
Clothing: Luna always wears short dresses that go to her mid-ish thighs. She wears knee-high socks, too. Her shoes are low-top converse. She has a necklace with the symbol of the moon on it.
Country/Dimension of Origin: The Moon.
Pet: Luna doesn't keep pets, but strays are always around her and her house.
Theme Song: Never Ending Dream by Cascada
Hobbies: Luna draws, swims, and ice skates.
Likes:The night time, nature/animals, music, reading, writing, and her hobbies.
Dislikes: Mean/evil people, humans, and the sun.
Fighting Style: Luna uses her magic and is good with archery but is also good with daggers and martial arts.
Magic/powers: Luna controls the stars and a bit of darkness. She can also heal herself and others.
Other stuff: Her name means moon.
Personality: Luna is pretty bipolar. YOu can never tell what mood she'll be in, but she's almost always hyper.
Bio: Luna and her family were the protectors of the royals of the Moon. When Kenji was taken to Earth the Moon fell into chaos. Warring worlds took it over. Luna knew there was one way and only one. She came up with a plan and snuck to Earth, risking her life, and knowing the new 'royals' would be looking for her.
Like? Comments, questions, concerns, addings? I'll be putting the date every time I add another character. ^-^ I like comments about the characters and story!!
My hands are at your throat and I think I hate you.
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Posted: Sat Jan 20, 2007 9:28 am
All your lies I'm not believing.
Okay! Now I'll actually start with the story. ^-^ I won't tell you the plot or anything, though. blaugh
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Kenji Nocrune walked to school, scowling. The bus was too early. Again. His schedual (SP?) always said that the bus was to come at eight. Instead, it came at seven forty-five. It'd been doing that for a week.
'It's the middle of January. They should have a system by now!' He thought angrily. He got to school before the buses even got there. He walked to his normal spot and plopped down. Everyone was cold exept for him. He nver got too cold, too hot, or sick. He sometimes thought he was an alien or something. After awhile all the buses and people finally came. Kenji went to class and sat in the back corner by the window, his usual seat. The teacher gave him an odd look and went back to her papers. Other classmates filed in and sat down, chatting with their friends. Out of the hallway bounced a strange girl. Everyone was staring at her bacause of her clothes and how bouncey she was. Kenji looked at the girl and wondered if she was mentally stable. She was wearing a dark blue dress that went to her mid-thighs. The sleeves of the dress were those of a tank top, but different material. She also wore white knee-high stockings and a pair of black low-top Converse. Her hair was a black-blue and went down to her butt. She scanned the room and Kenji got bored and looked out the window. The girl did a double take on Kenji and walked up to the teacher. She muttered something then gave the teacher a note, making the teacher stand up.
"This is our new student, Luna Ayama. I expect you all to be kind to her." She announched, and scanned the room, her eyes daring someone to opose (SP?) her. "You may sit ther, next to Kenji." She directed Luna to the seat. Luna went to the seat and looked at her backpack. She then took out a notebook and started to draw. The teacher rambled on and they went through their classes up until lunch.
Kenji noticed that Luna was in all of his classes and she always sat some what close to him. She seemed to pop up everywhere he was. At lunch he was one of the few people that went outside. He sat on a bench where there were no other people. Suddenly LUna came out of no where and sat next to him, withe her lunch box.
"Hi! I'm Luna Ayama. I noticed you were sitting alone so I came over." She smiled.
"Right..." Kenji glared at her, not wanting to be around anyone right then. He just kind of ignored her presence and busied himself with writing about what knew things he'd observed that day.
"What 'cha writing?" Luna asked, curious. She kind of craned her neck to try to see.
"Nothing of any importance." Kenji muttered. 'Ugh. Why is she bothering me?!' He thought.
"Oh... Okay." Luna replied quietly. She then seemed to regain her spirit and hyperness. "Cool! I like your bandana!" She complimented.
"... Okay. Whatever." Kneji grummbled, tired of her constant babble. Luna pouted and tried to think of what to say. Kenji stood up, just as Luna thought of something. He started walking, throwing his lunce bag away. Luna seemed to just appear next to him and he glared at herf.
"What's your name?" She asked quickly.
"My name? Kenji Nocrune. Why?" He asked.
"Because, I like to know names." She said slightly agitated. Kenji nodded and kept walking. "Wait... Hitame... Kun, where are you going? we're off school grounds. Won't you get in trouble?" Luna asked.
"No. I always do this. I've already done all my homework, and taken the math test for tomorrow." He replied, irritated now.
"Really? Wow! How? Why? When?" Luna bounced about, asking. Kenji twitched a little and turned to Luna.
"STOP ASKING QUESTIONS!!" He yelled. Luna blinked and stood still.
"I... I'm sorry." She whispered, trying not to cry. "I thought that if I asked questions then I'd get to know you. I noticed you're always alone so I figured I could be your friend..."
"What?" Kenji muttered to himself. "Look. I don't have friends. I don't want any. Go find someone else, please." He said calmly.
"Sorry." Luna muttered again. She truned around and started walking away.
"Ayama. I'm sure others will appreciate your friendliness (SP?)." Kenji encouraged, feeling bad. Luna just nodded once then started to run. Kenji felt bad for yelling but didn't understand why it was that big of a deal. People didn't talk to him.
'Besides, if she talks to me, she'd become an outcast. With the personality she's got I don't thinkg that would b too god. She's too outgoing.' He felt stupid for letting her just come up to him like that.
"Baka." He muttered angrily. He walked a few more blocks and went inside a small brick house. Immediatly Shadow meowed and ran to Kenji, marking his legs and purring like mad. Kenji went up to his room and plopped on his bed, bored. He thought about Luna and wondered why she'd come to him. He wasn't anything interesting, according to everyone. But Luna was hyper and outgoing so she'd make plenty of friends.
'All the better. Less people to bother me.' Kenji thought.
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Sooo? What do you guys think?? Comments! I want to hear your imput! This is not the end, trust me. This is gonna be a long-term thing so I'll post more when I write up more. ^-^
Yes, talking and thinking are in bold, it makes life easier to read.
My hands are at your throat and I think I hate you.
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Posted: Tue Jan 23, 2007 6:49 pm
All your lies I'm not believing.
Okay!! I'm adding a new part!
This one'll be shorter but a new character that'll become important is introduced.
-Squee-
Here goes!
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The next day Kenji didn't even wait for the bus. He ended up being one of the last people, though, which was surprising.
'That's odd.' He thought, irritated. He went to his usual spot but just as he got ther it was time to go inside. He reached his class and sat down, Luna was already in the seat the teacher had given her, drawing. Kenji took out his writing journal out and added to a story he'd been writing. Everything was normal in all of Kenji's classes, until Biology, the last class until lunch was over.
"Class! I have a surprise for you!" Ms. Takana had always been Kenji's favorite teacher and she seemed very happy. Kenji wondered what she had up her sleeve. "We have a MAJOR project that is worth almost your whole grade for this quarter." The class groaned. That meant they only had two weeks to do it because the quarter ended the first day in February. "You will each be assigned something to do. You will research it, write a report, and make a model. Oh. One thing I almost forgot." Ms. Takana grinned evily. "I've set you all up with partners." This time Kenji joined in the class groan. He hated projects with partners. Kenji payed no attention while Ms. Takana rattled off names and people either groand or cheered, until he heard, "Kenji and... Luna." He stared at Ms. Takana in disbelief, and she didn't even notice.
'What is this!? Why with her? Anyone, exept for her!' Kenji thought. 'Maybe I heard her incorrectly... No she speaks too clearly. Damn it!' Kenji looked at Luna, who looked as if nothing had happened at all. It didn't even look like she noticed, she was so busy drawing. Then the teacher told them they had to get together. Before Kenji could move Luna was already sitting next to him. He stared at her and she was already paying too much attention to her drawing book to notice.
"Well? Are you going to choose?" Ms. Takana was next to the table and holding a hat filled with papers. Kenji lookead at her like she was a ghost. Luna looked up at her and smiled.
"I'll choose." She said. The teacher held the hat out and Luna grabbed a paper and opened it. "Moon." She only said the word and made a pleased face. Ms. Takana smiled and wrote it down.
"Research, report, model. Don't just one of you do it." Ms. Takana said with a tone of smugness.
"So, since you leave right after lunch, I plan on coming with you so we can do this." Luna said as the teacher walked away.
"What about class time?" Kenji said more than asked, irritated.
"There is none." Luna said matter-of-factly.
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Hee hee. Pridictable, yes? No. I have special plans for all of this. And now to add Ms. Takana's profile to the profile post!!
My hands are at your throat and I think I hate you.
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Posted: Thu Feb 22, 2007 6:43 pm
All your lies I'm not believing.
God, it's been forever. Sorry. xp
I even changed my font. surprised Anyway, I finally came up with more plans!!
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"How do you know?" Kenji asked, refusing to give up.
"She said so, silly. You weren't paying any attention obviously." Luna said, rolling her eyes at him like he was an idiot. Kenji glared at the clock, wishing he had known about the stupid project. He sighed.
"Fine. Come on. I'm not going to the cafeteria today, and you better walk fast." Kenji muttered. He got up at the end of class and left, not caring if Luna was following. 'Why me?' He thought sourly. He walked through his front door and turned around, suprised that Luna had kept up with him. He held the door for her and she came in.
"Aw. That's a cute cat!" Luna said, picking up Shadow. "What's it's name?" She asked.
"His name is Shadow." Kenji said, smiling.
"Cute." Luna giggled. "He's purring!" Kenji stared at Shadow in slight shock. Shadow had never purred for anyone exept for Kenji. Shadow didn't even purr for Kenji's adopted parents.
'I can trust her.' Kenji silently decided. 'If Shadow is okay, then maybe we can be friends.'
"Let's start our project, please." Kenji said, changing the subject. Luna's face became suddenly serious.
"Right. Yes. We need to talk about that. Do you know an old legend of the moon?"
"Which one?" Kenji asked uncaringly.
"The one of the Great Moon Empire." Kenji shook his head no, actually listening now. "It is said that there is a huge empire on the moon. This empir is said to be bigger than Asia. It's also said that the reason the astronauts can't see it is because the Empire is full of magic. It's said that the Moon controls the water, but not forcefully. Apparently, many other people wanted the powers of the Moon for their own land or dimension."
"Your poin would be...? What's the point of knowing it?" Kenji asked, bored again. Luna ignored him.
"Another part of the story is the heir of the throne was brought to Earth fifteen years ago. No one could find the prince and his parents got taken and killed. The Moon was thrown into chaos. It's now ruled by the Sun Empire, Solar. The only way to defeat them is to find the prince. No one was allowed off of the Moon, but some have escaped and found refuge in the waters. There is only one that came directly on land to find the prince."
"Okay. Good story, but it's not going to help our project." Kenji said, eager to get it over with. Luna glared at him.
"It's not just a story! It's true. I know this because I'm looking for the prince!" Kenji stared at her like she was nuts.
"Right... And if this was true why tell me out of all people?" He asked, humoring her.
"Because..." Luna looked down, her voice and body shaky. "The stolen child's name was, and still is, Kenji Rakesh Nocrune." Luna looked up to see Kenji's reaction.
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I have to get off so I can't finish what I've written. I'll write more tomorrow.
My hands are at your throat and I think I hate you.
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