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Misaki Sana

PostPosted: Sat Feb 03, 2007 2:57 pm


My dearest angel,
Why do I feel
Why is there this constant pounding
That's never ending
My dearest angel,
Why can't I fly
Why can't I feel the sky
Like I once did
My dear angel,
where are my wings
Where have they gone
I try to feel for them
Yet I feel nothing but darkness
My dearest friend,
Why am I no longer like you
Why do I no longer dance in the light
And feel the warmth of the sky
My dearest angel,
What have I become
Have I fallen into the abyss
The darkness of hell
Or is it as I feared
My dearest angel
Have I become human?
PostPosted: Fri Feb 09, 2007 10:43 am


Some verses are too long, but it looks ok smile

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PostPosted: Fri Feb 09, 2007 11:17 am


I'm not that person who understands poetry.. or at least something like that!!!
PostPosted: Fri Feb 09, 2007 11:47 am


Ok. I'll see about fixing it then ^^'

Misaki Sana

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