Welcome to Gaia! ::

Su Tierra [Her Earth]
CharlaP

It is a dark place, very silent with a feeling of emptiness. She is not afraid though, for she knows she is safe. She takes a couple of steps across the vast emptiness. With a small smile across her lips, she slowly raises her now glowing left hand, and a tiny flower grows at her feet. She cautiously swings her arm, and miles upon miles of fresh green fields of grass appear underneath her feet. All around her grows a field of flowers and far beyond trees and plants of all kinds sprout up in such speed it seems they have always been there. She lowers her pale naked feet to the ground so that she may feel the soft springy carpet she had created. She looks onto the large and colorful world around her. With her right hand, she summons a large ball of light, the sun, to sit in the middle of her sky. She closes her eyes and gives a calm smiles. She gently breaths in the scent of the land and reopens her eyes to look out to the world, her world, her Earth. In content ness, she lowers herself into the grass, lays her body down and rests.


Short, I know, but something I just came up with while in writers workshop at school. It is basically the creation of the earth by Gaia (Mother nature, etc).

Comments, [constructive] critism, etc. are appriciated ^__^

Oh thank you!!

I had shown this to Aurah long before I posted it here and she said it was fine to...

Sadly I'm not as naturally or worldly as I should be, so I was couldnt do that must with the grass/natures/trees etc.. but you are right, I should have put more diversity into it.

I'm really glad you enjoyed my descriptions, those are my strongpoints ^___^ <3

Thanks for the comment! I'll try even harder next time I write something like this!
[[wow, the first time I wrote a good ending xDD]]

Well you know I love this story! Didn't you write a continueation of the story?(I'm pretty sure you had me read it.) I think you should post that as well.