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duello
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PostPosted: Thu Feb 15, 2007 12:49 pm


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PostPosted: Thu Feb 22, 2007 5:46 am


Concerning the first picture:
I really liked how the poem trailed the edges, imitating life's meandering ways and complexity. And even though I know next to nothing of poetry, I thought the poem was very nice in it's simplicity. I would suggest you did something about the white border around the straps - perhaps alter the colours to dark greys or add some texture to the background to differenciate it from the straps. That white just doesn't fit in with the elegance of the rest of the picture. And of course, that is a wickedly beautiful mask! Very good! ^^

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CharlaP

PostPosted: Sat Feb 24, 2007 5:57 pm


I really like the first picture AND the poem around it. It's a very nice effect having it run along the mask, and it's so deep and true.... Love it <3
PostPosted: Tue Feb 27, 2007 12:28 pm


edited the first one to fix the strap issue. you might say that it was a rough draft. as for the mask: italian craftsmanship, nothing else comes close...

duello
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PadawanCyn
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 27, 2007 3:45 pm


Bootiful!! whee
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