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The Nargle Puff

PostPosted: Fri Feb 16, 2007 11:10 am


Chapter One


Danny Phantom struggled to his feet, panting, sweat running down his
face. He wiped a trickle of ectoplasmic green blood seeping from his temple away with the back of his white glove, and winced at the stinging pain. He heard the determined cries of his friend Raven Riddle behind him, mixed with the loud kamikaze screams of his sister Jazz, the quiet but still in earshot cursing of his best friend Sam, and the terrified whimpering of his other best friend Tucker.

For the past six hours, the five friends had been battling Danny’s archenemy, Vlad Masters/Plasmius, and his enormous army of clones. The nutty fruit loop had been cloning himself for quite some time, and had made his move on Danny when he’d reached the solid clone count of 750. So far, Danny and his friends had wiped out 200.

They were hot. They were hurt. They were frustrated. And they were exhausted.

But still they held out.

Danny jumped out of the way of another beam fired from Clone #432, and toppled over from loss of balance. Fatigue clouded his eyes, and he struggled weakly to all fours, ignoring the burning pain in his side where only moments before he’d been blasted with a red ecto-beam.

“Oh, come, my boy!” the clone cackled. “I know you can do better than that!”

On ‘that’, he fired another beam, and Danny was too tired to even attempt to dodge it. It smashed into him and knocked him backward, into another clone. He let his head fall to the ground, completely exhausted and nearly ready to give up. He couldn’t take this much longer, it was aggravatingly enervating. He coughed from panting so hard and struggled to sit up.

A horrifying sight met his eyes.

All of Vlad’s clones had now completely surrounded him. He was encircled by Vlad after Vlad after Vlad. (AN: AAAH! Too many Vlads!) He heard Raven, Sam, Tucker, and Jazz struggling to reach him, but a group of clones were holding them back.

“Personal space here!” Danny protested weakly. “Personal—”

Before he could finish, five clones fired beams at him all at once. They collided together and did not push him backward, but stayed in one place and let their red-hot power loose over his scrawny body.

Danny screamed in pain and collapsed back to the ground, his teeth gritted, eyes tightly shut, trying to shun out the pain.

The clones suddenly began to part, giving Sam, Tucker, Raven, and Jazz a clear view of Danny. Four clones floated over to them and held them fast.

Raven glared daggers at Vlad, her fangs flashing as she bared them at him.

“Vlad,” she growled. “When I get my hands on you, I swear to God I’ll annihilate your miserable a**!”

“Shut up, girl.”

It was the real Vlad. He had come into the center of the circle, floating right above Danny with a malevolent, twisted smirk on his face. Danny’s face paled when he realized that Vlad was holding a large sword in his hands, thumbing the edges with his fingers.

He glared down at Danny twistedly, his red eyes flashing like smoldering coals.

“You, Little Badger,” he hissed. “Have become a great nuisance. You have made every plan that might bring my life back together a complete disaster. I even had a nice little daughter… until you made her hate me and run away.”

“You deserved it.” Danny retorted, panting, his voice hoarse.

“Oh, did I?” Vlad spat. “Not to be the Paragon of Virtue, but even I don’t deserve that! You don’t, either.” He raised the sword in his hand. “You deserve much worse.”

Horrified, Danny tried to scramble to his feet and run, run for his life, but he was too weak to do anything but watch helplessly as Vlad’s eyes narrowed and his mouth twisted into an evil sneer.

“Good-bye, boy.” He whispered.

“NO!” Sam, Tucker, Raven, and Jazz screamed.

But it was too late.

Vlad drove the sword downwards, straight into Danny’s heart.

Danny had only a moment to give one last strangled cry of agony

Before his body fell limply and lifelessly

To the ground.

DPDPDPDPDPDPDPDPDPDPDPDPDPDPDPDPDPDPDPDPDPDPDPDPDPDPDP
PostPosted: Sun Feb 18, 2007 8:10 pm


eek You killed Danny? Is that the end up the story there???
I've never actually watched the show, but your fanfic there is well written and I want more to the story!!! XD I loved your use of words... such as "aggravatingly enervating". I was impressed by that. I also wanna know why Vlad's daughter hates him and how Danny got her to hate him! Dang it!!! Now I have to find time to get hooked onto another show!!! scream
LOL, but great story there!!! I love your style and I can't wait to read more from ya! biggrin

Lady Seinu
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The Nargle Puff

PostPosted: Tue Feb 20, 2007 10:56 am


Lady Seinu
eek You killed Danny? Is that the end up the story there???
I've never actually watched the show, but your fanfic there is well written and I want more to the story!!! XD I loved your use of words... such as "aggravatingly enervating". I was impressed by that. I also wanna know why Vlad's daughter hates him and how Danny got her to hate him! Dang it!!! Now I have to find time to get hooked onto another show!!! scream
LOL, but great story there!!! I love your style and I can't wait to read more from ya! biggrin


Thanks. 3nodding If you need me to explain the whole Vlad-Danielle-Danny-hate-triangle, I can.
PostPosted: Sun Jun 03, 2007 11:18 am


Wootness! Chapter Two!

Sam, Tucker, Raven, and Jazz stood horrified and sorrowfully spellbound as they watched one of the only people they’d ever cared about fall to the ground, eyes shut and chest unmoving. Green ectoplasmic blood oozed from a wound in his chest.

A scream of heartbroken agony ripped through the sky, coming from Sam as she broke free of the clone holding her.

“DANNY!”

The loud and horribly triumphant laughter of Vlad and his clones echoed around the open land of Wisconsin, patronizing, evil, maniacal, and growing in horrible volume as each and every clone joined in.

“That was the most fun I’ve had in twenty years!” Vlad cackled.

“It can’t be!” Tucker cried, eyes filling with tears.

“Danny!” Jazz screamed, horrified. “It’s not possible! N—Not Danny… anyone but Danny…”

Raven closed her eyes, holding back tears, and felt a new feeling rise up within her as the echoing laughter rang out around her.

He killed her best friend. One of the only people she’d ever cared about, one of the only people who had ever cared about her. He was dead. And Vlad had killed him.

Rage. White-hot, burning, uncontrollable rage. Danny Fenton, her best and only friend, was dead, and Vlad was to blame. She’d always hated Vlad, but this was going too far. He had crossed the line farther than he ever should have even considered doing.

A tear of acid ran down her cheek and dropped to the ground, burning a flower and withering it to a blackened crisp.

“D—D—” she found herself beginning to say Danny’s name, but slowly her fury began to take over, and her eyes flew open, glowing a blinding red. A purple and black fire formed around her body.

“DAMN YOU!” she shrieked.

A huge, massive, uncontrollable force began to ripple from her body, slamming into each and every clone, and giving them one second to give a cry of pain before they disintegrated to the ground. The real Vlad was bowled over with a yell of surprise and pain and was thrown twenty feet away into a nearby tree.

He slid to the ground and didn’t move, his legs twisted horribly, obviously broken.

Sam ran toward Danny as Raven’s attack slowly ceased, tears streaming down her cheeks.

“Danny…” she whimpered. “No…”

She finally reached his limp and lifeless body, and bent slowly down, reaching out a hand to touch him. The second her fingers brushed his shoulders, she quickly withdrew them as though she’d been burned, holding them close to her heart.

I hopelessly

Helplessly

Wonder why

Everything has changed

Around me


Sam slowly inched back toward him as the others gathered around, their shoulders shaking, their faces pale with shock and heartbroken disbelief.

She took Danny’s shoulders and shook him, trying to bring him back into her arms, to never let him go, never let him leave her, ever again. He was like a plume of smoke, she couldn’t hold onto him no matter how frantically she grasped for his hand in the darkness.

I tell it to your face

But you lost your face along the way

And I’d say it on the phone

If I thought you were alone

Why do things have to change?


“Please, just wake up,” she begged him. “Don’t do this to me Danny. Don’t go. You can’t. Come on, wake up! Please just wake up!”

“Sam…”

It was Tucker. He stood behind Sam, back straight, but confidence lost. His glasses were steaming up from his tears.

You don’t need my pictures on your wall

You say you need no one

You don’t need my secret midnight call

I guess you need no one...


“He’s—he’s no going to—to…”

Sam drew her hands back from Danny’s shoulders and shuddered violently at the sight of glowing green blood covering her palms. Danny’s blood.

She whipped her head around to face Tucker, angry and forlorn, her beautiful face like a broken window—lost, broken, mixed-up, and confused.

“Not going to what? Not going to WHAT, Tucker?”

Tucker sighed, trying to hold back his sobs.

“To—to wake up. He’s—he’s—”

Raven stood behind them, shaking violently from shock on her attack on Vlad, gray eyes wide and staring straight ahead.

“Just say it already,” she whispered, voice cracked and crushed with emotion, horror, and anguish.

“He’s… he’s dead.”

Is anybody waiting at all for you?

Cause it’s time that we’ll tell

If it’s heaven, if it’s hell or if it’s

Anybody waiting at home for you?

Cause it’s time that we’ll tell this tale.



~

I know, it was a bit short, but trust me, the story is FAR from over. So stay tuned!!!

The Nargle Puff


ChrnosMiko

PostPosted: Wed Aug 01, 2007 10:17 am


I think that this story is VERY well written. It's rekindled my interest in Danny Phantom! It's very sad that Danny dies in this story. crying crying 3nodding Please continue to add to it! I want to see what happens!

(By the way, what was the bolded part? Was it a song? If so, who is it by?)
PostPosted: Wed Oct 17, 2007 12:49 am


OMG! Now I know how my fans felt when I left them at a cliffy for six months... very bad of me... very well written I must say very good.

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