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PostPosted: Sun Feb 25, 2007 5:42 pm


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What do you think of it?
PostPosted: Sun Feb 25, 2007 5:50 pm


I like the concept but I think bottom right of the tower could have been brushed with a much larger softer brush. Currently, I can see how it was erased.

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PostPosted: Sun Feb 25, 2007 5:55 pm


What would you suggest?
PostPosted: Sun Feb 25, 2007 5:56 pm


Avis-yam
I like the concept but I think bottom right of the tower could have been brushed with a much larger softer brush. Currently, I can see how it was erased.


But it might not be the effect you were going for. sweatdrop

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PostPosted: Sun Feb 25, 2007 5:59 pm


Hmm, I've got an idea for another one later tonight.
PostPosted: Sun Feb 25, 2007 6:10 pm


I'm learning how to make a planet.

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PostPosted: Sun Feb 25, 2007 6:13 pm


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I'm learning how to make a planet.


That sounds quite hilarious out of context.
PostPosted: Sun Feb 25, 2007 6:20 pm


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` Lt
I'm learning how to make a planet.


That sounds quite hilarious out of context.
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PostPosted: Sun Feb 25, 2007 6:57 pm


Don't use darkness to cover up mistakes. Fix them.

There should be more lighting and the sand should cover up the base tower better. Looks kind of weird. I mean, a clock tower in the middle of the desert(?). Maybe you should throw in something relating to time in the background. Or perhaps some text.
PostPosted: Sun Feb 25, 2007 7:40 pm


Eh, it was my first try at anything like that.

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PostPosted: Sun Feb 25, 2007 9:40 pm


` Lt
Eh, it was my first try at anything like that.


>_>

Well, as they say, "Practice makes perfect."
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