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 Posted: Mon Feb 26, 2007 7:36 pm
Still going through an urban-ish stage.. I think my proportions are actually closer to an album cover than my album cover was.. lol  Revised---  Any better? cool
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Posted: Mon Feb 26, 2007 7:44 pm
Your major problem is the font you use and the spacing. Try adding a graphic in the background.
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Posted: Mon Feb 26, 2007 7:47 pm
Alright, I'll give that a shot.. I'll post the revised image in this thread when I'm finished.
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Posted: Mon Feb 26, 2007 8:41 pm
Posted the revised image.. Feedback welcome. smile I think I need to move 'OG Version 1.0' over onto the brickwall.
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Posted: Mon Feb 26, 2007 8:53 pm
Hmm don't like the bricks. Like the uh .. big swooping dark brush you used (?). Don't know how to describe it, lol.
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Posted: Mon Feb 26, 2007 8:56 pm
That line in the back is blocking most of the text. And why'd you use a brick wall? gonk
Is that supposed to represent your tough personality but you sweet, childish heart because it ain't workin'. Maybe some abstract art in the back. You can abstract brushes by searching it on a search engine.
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Posted: Mon Feb 26, 2007 9:14 pm
I don't think it quite works...it might be the size of the signature or the brush that's blocking parts of the text.
The theme isn't quite apparent either. =/
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Posted: Mon Feb 26, 2007 9:15 pm
No its just supposed to represent how mentally unstable (ignorant?) I am. mrgreen Thanks for the input I'll work on it some more and release another revision tomorrow.
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Posted: Mon Feb 26, 2007 9:18 pm
toxic_S2 I don't think it quite works...it might be the size of the signature or the brush that's blocking parts of the text.
The theme isn't quite apparent either. =/ It doesn't have a theme I just went with what felt right. Which is probably why it sucks so bad. haha
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Posted: Mon Feb 26, 2007 9:21 pm
Ooh, I see. Just keep going with that feeling but also make sure that the whole thing meshes together the right way, too. xP
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Posted: Tue Feb 27, 2007 2:30 pm
Brick walls and abstract things don't go together. Try to keep to one thing. Like for the header I made for the guild homepage, I stayed with the green+tech theme.
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