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 Posted: Wed Feb 28, 2007 7:48 am
When all my fears come to haunt me,
I look at your face and I am saved.
When all my dreams crumble and shatter,
I picture your smile and my heart is healed.
When life pulls me down,
I reach for your love and everything is ok again!
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Posted: Tue Apr 10, 2007 3:43 am
your poem makes me wonder. The words create the picture in my mind of an angel or a muse but I think it lacks feeling behind the words. When I read it I don't feel like I glimpsed part of your soul I see the white of paper. Is there real truth in this poem or do you think you believe in something but your heart is not really in it? I mean no offense in saying this.
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