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 Posted: Wed Feb 28, 2007 4:34 pm
It stands over me while I beg for mercy. The sad thing is that he doesn't know how he hurts me. I've liked him all along & I've never been able to move on. I can't figure out why this feeling for him is so deep. I think it's over at night because I'm unable to sleep. I think of him constantly. I just wish that he would like me.
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Posted: Sat Mar 17, 2007 9:37 pm
maybe you should add more... it leaves alot of holes.. but you write when you feel it.. and its really hard to fit in more when your not in the sam mood.. so don't kill it if theres nothing more to it :peace: xd
ne who, its good, and you write what you feel. Feelings bring peams to life most the time..
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