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 Posted: Mon Jul 04, 2005 8:53 am
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Posted: Mon Jul 04, 2005 8:57 am
Alright, I'm locking this thread because, unfortunately, you haven't followed through with the critique requitrement. I'll keep it locked for three days. By that time, if you've made your three critiques, I'll unlock. If not, I'll have to delete. I'm really sorry, but we need people giving eachother feedback, and it is a requirement outlined clearly in the rules. sad
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The Bookwyrm Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Jul 07, 2005 7:20 pm
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Posted: Thu Jul 07, 2005 8:48 pm
Excellent with feeling and imagery; you tend to overuse your adjectives, however.
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Posted: Fri Jul 08, 2005 8:09 am
thankee ^^
will keep in mind
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