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 Posted: Wed Feb 28, 2007 9:03 pm
hi i'm new i'm from Puerto rico and i'm also 19 years old i'm joining the air force on march 12 2007 so yeah i'm happy... i'm a proud withc and till want to learn more if u have any questions feel free to pm me ^_^
so heres a poem for u ppl to read hope u like it its all mine ^_^
THIS MASK I WEAR
What do you see, when you stare into these deep eyes of mine
Can you see my suffering, no just the fake happiness
This mask upon my face shields you from the truth
Why do I hide how I really feel
My life is a Masquerade of happiness
When you see my smile, you see the mask I wear everyday
As I walk by crying inside
As my heart aches from the pain of your crime
My deception is a justified action of deceit
Hiding behind these walls made of lies
As I drown inside like an overdose
My silent tears held inside
Can you see through this mask I wear
Hiding behind this mask day by day
Do you understand now why I wear it
Night is the only time I truly reveal myself
What do you see, when you stare into these deep eyes of mine
Can you see my suffering, no just my fake happiness
This mask upon my face shield you from the truth
Why do I hide how I really feel
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Posted: Wed Feb 28, 2007 9:15 pm
crying That makes me sad... I hope you can learn to feel the happiness as well as you can feel the sadness!
It's interesting that while you said you were happy, your poem was about simply pretending to be happy...
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Posted: Wed Feb 28, 2007 9:18 pm
i know i like to write sad stuff cuz i can feel ppl emotions and most off then are sad so i wrote the poem for them... but i'm olso sad and i cant say why ...
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Posted: Wed Feb 28, 2007 9:19 pm
Since you're new here I won't give you a warning this time, but we do require you put things into the appropriate forum here. The "Entertainment Center" is where all things such as art, writing, and discussion of games, movies, tv, books, etc, belong. Please keep this in mind next time. I'll move this topic after you've responded so you know where it went. ^^;
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Posted: Wed Feb 28, 2007 9:22 pm
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Posted: Wed Feb 28, 2007 9:24 pm
Also...PLEASE use basic grammar. Its a requirement at this guild. sweatdrop From now on it'll be official warnings, not just reminders. Sorry. sweatdrop
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Posted: Wed Feb 28, 2007 9:25 pm
Dark Playmate,
Aah, I know how that is. I'm convinced it's why the psychologists diagnosed me with bipolar, more than the fact that I actually *had* it - although the tendancy's definately there.
Maybe you should cleanse yourself or whatever? Get rid of it? If it's not there for a reason, then it's really doing you no good. Of course, that's unless you have a reason to be sad that you're just purposely forgetting... lol
Oh, the thread is being moved (read Loki's post for why) in case you didn't notice.
[Edited: added] Nevermind, you saw already. wink
Windsong
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Posted: Fri Aug 17, 2007 10:47 pm
wow great poem I wish I could say that to some people
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