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Posted: Thu Mar 01, 2007 9:02 pm
But it's going to take a while to get here. But I just wanted to know who's read it, and if they liked it.
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Posted: Thu Mar 08, 2007 12:24 pm
I loved it! There were a few parts where I got really confused, because I couldn't tell whether I was looking at Jesse, Claudio, or The Writer. The three characters look very similar.
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Posted: Fri Mar 16, 2007 10:25 pm
Heh, they do, don't they? What bothered me most was how they seemed to just take jumps foward in the story, so you weren't sure what was going on or felt like part of the story wasn't there.
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