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keiiii

PostPosted: Sun Mar 04, 2007 11:38 pm


Quiet here... *makes some noise!*



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One thing about the angle of the torso -- the torso is correct (more or less), the head is not. The head was supposed to be tilted to match the angle of the torso. I forgot about it when I was painting the head. sweatdrop

Soooo, anyone here? ninja
PostPosted: Wed Mar 07, 2007 8:44 pm


That's quite good! What kind of program did you use for it? I think it might be better if the colors blended a little better, I never was one for the seperated look... and, oh, the nose. It points kind of UP... in an anime-ish way, and I think that takes away from it.

Other than that, I really like it. It's an original design, and ESPECIALLY love how you made the flying fish and the birds. heart

Like I said, though, color blending, especially in the clouds and water :nodnodnod:.

x.Marsh[mel]low.x
Captain


keiiii

PostPosted: Sun Mar 11, 2007 11:53 pm


You have a sharp pair of eyes. ninja You're right about the nose, but I don't think it's a flaw, personally. My drawing style (not the coloring style, obviously) is strongly influenced by anime, so I'll call a stylistic choice on this one.

The background certainly could use more work. I do like the "separated" look (assuming you mean what I think you mean) but it's obvious that the background isn't up to par compared to the foreground. gonk I need more practice with landscapes!

Thanks for the input~
PostPosted: Mon Mar 12, 2007 9:11 am


keiiii
Quiet here... *makes some noise!*



User Image - Blocked by "Display Image" Settings. Click to show.



One thing about the angle of the torso -- the torso is correct (more or less), the head is not. The head was supposed to be tilted to match the angle of the torso. I forgot about it when I was painting the head. sweatdrop

Soooo, anyone here? ninja


That is really good.....

jene-chan


keiiii

PostPosted: Wed Mar 21, 2007 1:48 am


Thank you biggrin
PostPosted: Thu Apr 05, 2007 9:53 am


I love it. and personally, the tilt of the head isn't as bad as you say it is. it's like she's embracing the light.

Sarcastic_Angel


Golden_the_Ponyboy123

PostPosted: Sun Jul 15, 2007 10:30 am


this is absolutely gorgeous!
there really isn't anything I can critique, and I know personally I like being told what I oculd consder changing...it's very unique.
I think there isn't exactly a direct message, and I like that a lot.
It isn't cheesy, it's just beautiful and simple. mrgreen
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