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Posted: Mon Mar 05, 2007 8:29 pm
I remember a period in my life when happiness was the core of my soul, which is now darkened by the black clouds of self-loathing and lugubriosity. A time when love filled the void in my heart, laughter drowned out the faint echoing sound of woefulness, and smiles hid the tears of melancholia that were kept hidden within the corner of my mind. Before - when I use to garment myself in laced pink tops, generally with a floral pattern at the rims. When colors use to be the essance of my wardrobe, unlike now, where my apparel consists of nothing but black chained pants with long-sleeved shirts, hiding the many secrets that I keep hidden on my body. Long ago, or at least what seems long ago, when my golden blonde hair would rest gently on my relaxed shoulders, prepared to perfection without a single strand out of place. Ages ago, when my royal blue eyes were deep enough to drown the soul of any man who dared cross my path in search of a mate to ride side-by-side with him along the artery of Happiness. The scent of my lily perfume hypnotized the most wisest of men, bewitching him to fufill my every need at the snap of a finger.
I told you it was only the begining xD. I will probably write more of it tonight. I have a while to finish it, so..xD.
Constructive critisism is always appreciated. I know I am not that good, so, I take all the advice I can get xD.
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Posted: Mon May 07, 2007 7:59 pm
I definitely want to see more of this story....you kept me wrapped up in it....a SURE sign that you are an excellent writer! ^_^
Sin, Halo_Rising mrgreen
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