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PostPosted: Sat Mar 10, 2007 12:54 pm


This is my first poem. Please tell me how it is, but be nice. Like I said, its my first one.

I fell in love with her pale blue eyes
that seemed to know enterity
hidden behind her glasses.
It was a enterity I only knew.

Her short brown hair
flutters in the wind,
as she walks gracefully as an angel.

But now one other knows the enterity,
hidden beyond her glasses.
One other has stared unto her blue eyes deeply.
I feel myself drifting farther away.

I see them together.
I see them laughing and they wave to me.
I want to break into tears, but instead reply with a smile.
I don't want the angel to see me in tears,
because I want to be her knight.

Yet because of this,
she'll never know of my feelings.
She'll always look at me as a friend.
Now all I can do is look as they walk the road of love
and leave me here,
all alone.

The more I try to recover,
the more I want to see her face,
but I also see the boy.
I see her laughing,
and I stay quiet.

She asks, "Why are you so quiet?"
Finally a chance,
but I miss it.
I freeze up
and walk away.

She talks to her boyfriend.
I feel jealous.
That was my one link to her.
I want her boyfriend to disappear.

My one link broken
and I finally understand,
what I tried to avoid.

I'll never have her
but will never forget.
I realize,
unless I tell her,
I'm doomed to this endless circle.

I walk,
then I run.
I wonder how she'll feel.
I tell her I love her
and get it off my chest.

Now no matter,
how she'll react
at least I know I told her
and I have no regrets.
PostPosted: Mon Jun 18, 2007 4:37 pm


How very lovely! heart

I love the emotion and sincerity of the language.

Charlemander

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