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 Posted: Sun Mar 11, 2007 1:01 pm
The other night i had some Faaabulus insperation that (interestingly enough) we had an assignment on in english the next day
i snuck out on a clear night and sat in my backyard looking up at the moon.
it was fabuluss
and then i wrote a fantastic poem called 'underwater moon bath'
(:
how about y'all?
what are some good insperations?
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Posted: Sun Mar 11, 2007 7:22 pm
Sitting int the park in the sun, watching the clouds. Or, I love to climb the tree in my front yard. I sit up in a certain spot that has three branches coming out of a perfectly flat, butt-shaped branch so it would be impossible to fall. It's the best place to write/read. . .
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Posted: Sun Mar 11, 2007 7:23 pm
You should post the poem you wrote, I'd like to read it.
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Posted: Mon Mar 12, 2007 3:30 pm
Merenwen99 Sitting int the park in the sun, watching the clouds. Or, I love to climb the tree in my front yard. I sit up in a certain spot that has three branches coming out of a perfectly flat, butt-shaped branch so it would be impossible to fall. It's the best place to write/read. . . oooo i love to sit in trees! there is a great one at my old elementary school. i can sit up there and watch little kids on the curly slide (: okay. here is my poem Underwater Moon Bath
I am trapped inside my body
I am dieing to slip through my skin
And jump into an underwater moon bath
I would let the cool light of the mooon
Wash over where my neck used to be
And fill me up with a silent breath
I would scower my scalp with the distant stars
Extend my arms to the bottomless sky
And pluck a palmfull of the tiny beads
The crisp shadows of trees and rooftops
Would p***k my skin, clensing every pore
And then I would shake myself free
And climb back between my sheetsThe end :3
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Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2007 8:24 am
That's lovely. Maybe I only like it so much because I know the feeling, but It's really lovely. You said "bluck" instead of "pluck" though on line three of stanza three.
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Posted: Tue Mar 13, 2007 10:40 pm
Merenwen99 That's lovely. Maybe I only like it so much because I know the feeling, but It's really lovely. You said "bluck" instead of "pluck" though on line three of stanza three. Thank you :3 a clear night is so awesome (++ fixes spelling)
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Posted: Tue Mar 20, 2007 6:18 pm
Wonderful poem!
I would love to climb my roof one day whenever there's a party so I can relax...or just any day in general. That would be awesome.
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Posted: Tue Mar 20, 2007 7:41 pm
[S.E.C.C.O.N] Wonderful poem!
I would love to climb my roof one day whenever there's a party so I can relax...or just any day in general. That would be awesome. yay!! i love sitting on roofs. it is just so peacefull and secluded (:
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Posted: Wed Mar 21, 2007 7:16 am
I like your poem, (it might sound strange) but it sounds very poetic.
I always get inspired to write something great when I'm up above the city looking down on everything. Being able to see the hills in the distance and the changing clouds of the skies gives me so many ideas. I love it.
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Posted: Thu Mar 22, 2007 4:46 pm
Pain gives me a lot of inspiration.
As do learning; esspecially about mental disorders and other's lives.
That may sounds strange, but I find nothing more inspirational. sweatdrop
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Posted: Fri Mar 23, 2007 3:12 pm
20 Shades of Crazy Pain gives me a lot of inspiration. As do learning; esspecially about mental disorders and other's lives. That may sounds strange, but I find nothing more inspirational. sweatdrop
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Posted: Mon Jul 09, 2007 7:07 am
outside at night, perferably in the forest or my backyard always seems to give me insperation for all sorts fo things. maybe it's because I'm more awake at night than during the day. eh... movies and music are the main thing that inspire me though. my story hope that I hope to post was inspired by the labrynth.
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